July 29

Time worked:  :56

Work done:  Revising “Adventures in Pithea.” Not nearly as many pages done today, though I forgot to count. There were a lot of distractions tonight. Late start, dealing with a cold, and people talking to me a lot. I ended up giving up on the actual revising and finishing up with character profiling I started a while ago, to send to my sister who has recently finished the story and is ready to start comparing notes. Currently though, Naolin, Missy, and Julius are embroiled in a maddened fight for their lives. But I can’t help but wonder if I wrote it better the first time around.