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Book Review: Homicide at Blue Heron Lake

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Homicide at Blue Heron Lake
by Susan Page Davis and Megan Elaine Davis

My rating: 3.5 / 5
Genre: Christian romance, mystery

Returning temporarily to the small, lakeside town in which she grew up, Emily Gray and her high school friend Nate Holman stumble upon a body on the island on which Emily’s family has a cottage.

My favorite thing about this book is the setting; the authors (a mother-daughter team) clearly have a lot of experience in this kind of area, and that experience is translated well to the book. As mysteries go, this story is fairly bland. Emily and Nate do look into the death of the body they found, amidst rekindling a small spark of a flame that had started back in high school. Emily also reconnects with locals that still live in the area and uncovers terrible secrets from the past. However, though Emily does investigate and even dig up some of the truth, final details are put together “off-screen” by the police and reported to her later. It’s probably more realistic than the common mystery trope where the amateur detective manages to figure everything out alone and the police do nothing, but it all just felt a little weak for a mystery genre book.

The romance was definitely a heavier aspect in the book, though fortunately, it was very clean. Sometimes even Christian books can’t be trusted in that area, but this one can be. As for the Christian genre side of things (which is part of what kept the romance believably clean), I do have to say that one particular story arc seemed to be the main inclusion of Christianity, but it was also fairly weak. A woman who has basically gone down a New Age-y path to trying to be at one with nature or something has come to realize that it’s not really good enough. She confides in Emily, who gives her a broad explanation of Christianity, and the woman seems to latch onto the idea, but she is never given more than that broad explanation, at least not that we see. It felt a little too much like the real-world tendency toward moral deism, which is pervasive and dangerous. I don’t think it was intended that way, though, it didn’t bother me all that much. Overall, this is a decent mystery book with a Christian worldview and clean romance.

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Book Review: Out of Darkness

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Out of Darkness
The Lightseeker Series #1
by Daniel J. Atkins

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Middle grade Christian fantasy

When your entire civilization is underground, sources of light are important. Many of the inhabitants of the underground world are stone hunters, digging for increasingly more rare glowstones, which provide a safer, more efficient means of light than fire does. Fin and Sky, both 12-year-old stone hunters, begin to hear more and more about forgotten, forbidden mysteries and are compelled to seek the answers and the light. This leads them on a wild and dangerous adventure as they unravel the truth that some people want to stay hidden.

I think Fin is meant to be the main character in this book, but Sky really drives the plot. She’s the one who first has a reason to go on this adventure, and though Fin is not exactly dragged along reluctantly, his motivations aren’t as clear. Fin, though, is the one who is more dynamic in this book, growing up a bit throughout the journey. I really like the Christian allegory that’s present in this book; it’s not exactly subtle, but it’s also not over-the-top or preachy. I found myself looking forward to the next way that the “All Mighty” would clearly work in the story. In a book like this meant for older kids and young teens, a clear hand of guidance is a good way to introduce them to the very real, but not always so easily discerned, providence that God can provide in real life. I feel the need to mention that Fin and Sky do defy adults and authorities a bit, since I know parents can be bothered by that, especially if there are no consequences, but my hope is that as Fin and Sky come to learn more about the All Mighty and the light they’re seeking, maybe their actions will be less questionable. And this can be something for parents to discuss with younger readers.

The author’s writing style is…”unusual” is the best way I can think to describe it. He tends to pause the story to share background info with the reader in a very conversational tone. I never had an issue with this, but I wonder if some others might. (I don’t think the target audience would be bothered by it at all.) At least one of these interjections even provides a little humor. There are a few things that did bother me a little, though, like the confusion I had about the fact that the powers that be claim that people have just always lived underground, yet comparisons are often made to “normal” life (like underground goats have larger eyes than normal goats, and it’s mentioned at least once that undergrounders have adapted to living underground). For people who don’t really know their history or origins, it’s strange that they seem to know plenty about how life above ground might be different. I also wish that the author had interjected one less giant snake encounter, maybe including a different peril; it was just a little repetitive after a bit. That being said, the world that the author has set up is rich and intriguing and makes me want to know more about what happens to Fin and Sky.

When I read a self-published book, it is my intention not to let things that a professional editor would help with affect my view too much. I’m not saying that there is no burden of responsibility here, but it’s harder for self-published authors. So while it did not affect my rating, I will at least mention that there are several issues throughout the text—mostly comma errors and formatting issues that I couldn’t help but be distracted by. (This might be as much because I’m self-published myself and have spent a lot of time looking for and correcting formatting issues in my own books before publishing them, so most others may not notice those at all.)

This was an overall fun read. I really think that things that made me stop and scratch my head would not be noticed at all by younger readers. It’s easy for me to recommend this for kids around age 10 and up, anyone that enjoys an adventure with a positive message or fantasy with a Christian worldview. I could also easily see it being a book that parents read with/to kids even younger than that.

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Book Review: The Hot Marble

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The Hot Marble
by Rosemary B. Althoff

My rating: 2 / 5
Genre: Christian sci-fi

When 10-year-old Patrick and his 8-year-old sister Gracie watch something fall from the sky and find a hot marble. Patrick asks his physicist brother Lewis to analyze the otherworldly marble, and that leads to all three siblings, plus Lewis’s engineer friend Fred to another world. Lanthra has two moons, a near-total ban on electricity, and heavy conflict between two sides—those who follow Earth’s Jesus and those who follow earthly demons.

I was intrigued by the melding of sci-fi and Christianity when I decided to read this book. The author does have some interesting ideas here, particularly on the sci-fi side of things. The ban on electricity and also on traveling to Earth makes this a medieval-type world, but with pockets of technology that come across like magic. But the Christianity side is underwhelming, if not downright confusing at times. First and foremost, the theology of creation, the fall, and the redemption provided through Jesus Christ’s death and resurrection is questionable here. God created the entire universe, and when Adam and Eve sinned, the entirety of the creation was cursed. This means there can’t be planets out there with people who are not under the curse, but that is what Althoff is presenting here. The people of Lanthra have observed Earth enough to know about the curse (which they say affects only people from Earth, though I guess it can spread to people of Lanthra via demons that travel there?) and the birth, death, and resurrection of Jesus. I guess all of this means that people of Lanthra aren’t under the curse of sin (not that they refer to sin or even creation or the fall at all, just a vague curse), so it really don’t matter if they worship Jesus or not, though it still seems to be a bad thing that some worship Satan/demons. Beyond that, one character from Lanthra seems to be a sort of prophet, in direct communication with God in some form. And characters are said to have inner “dragons” that could be seen to simply be their consciences or inner desires, but one character’s inner dragon talks to him? And it’s all presented as if this is some well-known concept that shouldn’t seem unusual to the reader, but I was really lost.

I understand that, even when a book is written with a Christian worldview, unbelievers will have sinful, fallen natures. Fred and Lewis want nothing to do with Christianity, and their character arcs seem to be the driving force behind the religious aspects in this book. But Fred, in particular, made me really uncomfortable ogling women all the time. And there was a line that really stood out to me as a red flag, which involved one character telling Fred that the “Master” wants to enjoy various things about him, including his “taste for busty women.” Um…no…just no.

There truly are some great allegorical moments in this book, and I think I can see what the author was going for. But in the end, I think there was too much going on in too many different directions for me to be able to pick out one cohesive story to enjoy. And the book ends on a cliffhanger that I was fortunately able to see coming. As for recommendations, the book is marketed, at least on Amazon, in teen and children’s categories, but I would not recommend it to those ages at all. All 4 of the characters mentioned in the synopsis have POV sections, but he older brother and his friend are in their 30s, and they are larger characters than the 10- and 8-year-old. There’s also a fair amount of language in the book. (In fact, now that I think about it more, it bugs me A LOT that this book is listed in the categories of “Children’s Action & Adventure Sci-Fi Books” and “Children’s Science Fiction Books” on Amazon with the amount of language and discussion of women’s bosoms that is included in it!) If you’re interested in the premise of spiritual warfare crossed with physics and aren’t bothered by the issues I had with it, you might be interested in this book.

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Book Review: Daican’s Heir

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Daican’s Heir
The Ilyon Chronicles #6
by Jaye L. Knight

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Christian fantasy

Spoiler notice: The following review may contain some spoilers for the previous books in the series, starting with Resistance.

This final book in the series hits the ground running, with a plan hatched between books put into action to try to recover Samara and then bring the fight to Davira, the ultimate goal being to restore two rightful kings to their thrones. I enjoyed returning to this world one last time, and I appreciated the way the author wrapped up the series, for the most part. I’m not a huge fan of all of the major characters, but I think Kyrin bugged me less in this book, at least. A story set in a fantasy world that still manages to present something of a gospel message can’t be easy to do, and I applaud Knight’s presentation here. I still feel like the gospel message is watered down a lot, though, and I don’t know if that was intentional or not.

The stakes never quite felt as high as I would have expected and might even have preferred for being the final book in a series full of persecution and war. It’s not necessarily a bad thing to avoid a lot of fighting, death, etc., but it felt a little off compared to the rest of the series to this point. The resolution was just too…easy, I guess. We also continue with the “everyone must be paired” trope that I started to notice in the previous book. I was able to skim over some of it, but it still slowed down the story for me now and then.

Here at the end of the series, I’d say that if you’re looking for clean fantasy, whether you specifically want the Christian angle or not, this is a good series to read (though it’s probably too Christian for those who can’t stand much of that in their books at all). It’s not super heavy on fantasy elements, either, so fans of clean books with a Christian worldview, fantasy or not, would probably enjoy this series as well. It does lean into the romance a lot more in the last few books, even with more physical interaction than some might prefer (nothing graphic, though). I did not enjoy the series as much as my 16-year-old daughter did; she loved it pretty much all the way through. I don’t think I’d choose to re-read any of this in the future, but I am glad I read the series once.

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Book Review: Shepherds & Kings

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Shepherds & Kings
by Christina Minoli

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Children’s Christmas story

Though apparently Ishan has beat up other kids plenty in the past, it’s not pre-meditated when he punches the most gentle kid in school. And since he’s been told that one more infraction will cost him some awards that are dear to him, at first, he’s just devastated over the loss of the rewards. But then the boy doesn’t return to school for a while and there don’t seem to be any consequences for Ishan. What follows is an internal battle that opens the door for a lesson that Ishan would never have been open to before.

The bulk of this story is Ishan grappling with himself over the violence he’s committed on a fellow student and the lack of any kind of backlash. He spends his days constantly dreading the hammer that is sure to fall. Then his grandfather gives him something of a Bible lesson using an old, apparently creepy, nativity set as the vehicle. The lesson hits home with Ishan, though I have to say that this scene went a little strangely for me. The lesson is fairly messy or shallow to start with, though maybe that’s just because Grandpa isn’t intending to deliver a gospel message, but Ishan understands these concepts a little too easily to me. I’m not sure if Ishan’s age is ever given, and the book seems to take place in India (though I got that from context, because I don’t remember any indication being given), so I can only guess that the grade he is in means he’s around 10 or 11 years old. Between that and the fact that he doesn’t seem to have been brought up in a Christian household, some of his thought processes just felt far too advanced. Not that a kid at that age can’t understand Christ’s sacrifice and his/her need for a Savior, but it’s how quickly he picks up on it and the wording that is used that seems a little farfetched to me.

I think the story could have used some fleshing out, especially for some of the side characters. The new teacher that starts the upset that leads to Ishan lashing out, for example, seems more involved at the beginning than she ends up being. I’d have liked to know a little more about Ishan’s grandfather—he seems actually kind of grumpy or strict when he’s first introduced, and then he pulls out this Bible lesson like he’s a completely different person. And probably the biggest is Anton, the kid that Ishan punches; I really felt that he was short-changed as a character, only being used as the foil for Ishan. I would have liked more. And though Ishan himself is the most developed character, I have to say that I would love to know how a kid who is clearly widely known as the school bully, who is only one step away from losing his end-of-year awards, is a house captain? Aren’t those generally kids of better standing in the school than Ishan could possibly have? On the other hand, apparently he’s really smart, gets good grades, and even participates eagerly in various school activities…yet he’s the school bully. So maybe more development would have been good there after all. It should be noted that a desire to know more about some of these characters is a good thing, though, because it means I was invested in the story enough to wish for more.

So all of that being said, the story is touching and would make for a great read around Christmas time. I had to look up a couple of things to understand what was even being referenced (like “string hopper” and “baba”), which is what led me to deduce that we were in India for this story, but that didn’t bother me. It’s difficult to really say whether kids around the age this is meant for (10-12?) would follow it well and enjoy the story, since it’s more introspection than anything else. However, that doesn’t mean I wouldn’t recommend it to those kids. I think that parents reading it with them or before them, so they can discuss any questions along the way, would be a great way for families to read this story during Christmas time.

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Book Review: Bitter Winter

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Bitter Winter
The Ilyon Chronicles #5
by Jaye L. Knight

My rating: 3 / 5
Genre: Christian fantasy

Spoiler notice: The following review may contain some spoilers for the previous books in the series, starting with Resistance.

The resistance camp near Landale suffers great tragedy that threatens to continue until the whole camp is dismantled. Can Jace save everyone he loves?

The first 4 books in the series follow the Landale resistance fighters and those that they bring into their ranks along the way as they first must figure out a way to survive the heavy persecution of their religion and then discuss at least the possibility of going on the offensive. With two rightful kings amongst their numbers, there is talk of somehow taking back their thrones and putting and end to the tyranny that begun with Emperor Daican. But first they have to make it through the winter, and that brings the forward momentum of this series to a screeching halt. This book is akin to being an episode or two away from a series finale of a television show and having to deal with a filler episode. Maybe the episode is good in its own right, or maybe not, but you really just want to know how the over-arching plot of the season is going to resolve. That’s what we have here, and it’s just as disappointing.

A couple of disastrous events leaves the camp reeling, and the entire book is spent just trying to recover/fix what happened. I think the author made several unnecessary choices in this book, maybe to make it seem more relevant after all, or maybe to evoke more emotion. Either way, I was not nearly as engaged as I have been through most of the rest of the series, hearkening back to the tedium I felt in the first half of the first book. I’ve noted before that this particular author’s style is to have far too many POV characters, so many minor characters whose perspectives don’t really add much to the story and add instead add more of a burden to try to differentiate between a lot of different voices (which I don’t think she does all that well), and here I realized that she’s also falling into the trope that everyone must have someone. Every side character that has had a POV at some point has either found a mate or is in the process of it during this book. At least one of these characters seems to only even have a POV for the purpose of us seeing him start to have an interest in someone. I like romance, I really do…but I like it to be more subtle, and even though this isn’t a straight-out romance genre series, the romance side of things is starting to feel very unsubtle.

So I didn’t really care for this, the penultimate book in the series. It wasn’t bad, and and I am still enjoying the overall world the author has set up. But I think she could have distilled this story into a side novella or even started the next book at the end of this harsh winter and caught us up on what happened, because…well, not much did. My 16-year-old daughter continues to be a huge fan of this series, and I’m sure I’m in the minority regarding this installment in the series, but I do still recommend it to older teens through adults (it’s not YA, but it’s very clean), fans of fiction with Christian elements, whether you’re really into fantasy or not.

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Book Review: Exiles

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Exiles
The Ilyon Chronicles #4
by Jaye L. Knight

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Christian fantasy

Spoiler notice: The following review will contain some spoilers for the previous book in the series, Samara’s Peril.

The resistance camp near Landale is growing all the time, and now the exiled rightful king of Samara is part of the group. The rebels need more allies, so they travel to Dorland to try to enlist the help of the rest of the cretes and even the giants. Meanwhile, the heat is being turned up in both Landale and the capital, while more and more people turn to the one true God, Elôm, all the time.

It was nice to expand even further out in this book, seeing the homeland of the dragon-riding cretes and then meeting the giants. There is a lot of diplomacy and some more snatches of battle in this book. Some of my favorite parts involved Daniel, the son of the emperor, who has always been at odds with his father, but now there’s even more to separate them. There were some parts of the book that I was more interested in than others, and Kyrin is still a major character that I wish was more dynamic. In four books, she hasn’t really changed much, and she’s been pretty boring, overall. Jace annoyed me less in this book, though he did make me shake my head a few times.

Some major events happen in this book, and it ends with a promise of both danger and hope. With two books left in the series, I’m really looking forward to seeing how all of this plays out. My 15-year-old daughter continues to be a huge fan of this series, so it’s easy for me to recommend this book to older teens through adults (it’s not YA, but it’s very clean), fans of fiction with Christian elements, whether you’re really into fantasy or not.

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Book Review: Samara’s Peril

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Samara’s Peril
The Ilyon Chronicles #3
by Jaye L. Knight

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Christian fantasy

With Samara, a neighboring country, in peril, the resistance members in Landale embark on a mission to get as much information as they can. This venture will completely change the life of Jace, the half-ryrik who was an orphan, slave, and gladiator before being rescued by Rayad. Then, as war looms between Emperor Daican’s forces and Samara, news comes out of Samara of a man who performs miracles and heals the sick. Could this be the Savior that Elôm’s followers have been waiting for?

There was a lot of really good stuff in this book—action, emotion, and some major surprises. The book has 4 parts, though it mostly breaks down to 2 in my mind: the info-gathering mission and everything surrounding the battle for Samara. The first part contained a reveal that was pretty exciting, and I liked that it was both good and bad, with a hope of more good to come. However, for me, the first part was also heavily bogged down by Jace, who seems to have taken the lead as the main-main character (which I said in my review of the previous book seemed to be Kyrin, but though she does have plenty of POV scenes, this book is definitely Jace’s, overall). Because of his half-ryrik status, Jace can’t bring himself to fully accept that he has a soul and can possibly be loved by Elôm. Despite many people that he trusts giving him a lot of wise and insightful advice, he kind of just covers his ears and sinks deeper and deeper into darkness. I fully understand the purpose of this, in the frame of the grander story, but I wish it could have been done with a little less repetition and without being drawn out so much.

In the 2nd half of the book, a lot of what became an issue for me was mostly personal preference, which I’ll try to explain without spoiling anything. Once I realized in the previous book that the biblical parallel was more to Old Testament times than New, I thought about the possibility of a Messiah character, and sure enough, it’s hinted at in the synopsis for this book. But considering that any text from the “King’s Scrolls” that have been presented in these books have been taken right from the Bible, I was imagining more of a parallel to biblical history, when apparently Knight was going for more of an analogy. The Savior character in this book is vastly different from Christ in the Bible, which threw me off enough to make some scenes much less emotional for me than they might have otherwise been. On top of that, this character was such a small part of the book, he seemed to only really be there to advance Jace’s personal characterization. It was just underwhelming. My 15-year-old daughter, who first recommended this series to me, was disappointed that I was so disappointed, because she loved that aspect of the book. So clearly personal preference plays a large role here. A severely watered-down Christ character disappoints me, but it might not disappoint others. And in the end, I still liked the overall book enough to give it 4 stars. This review might make that rating seem strange, but the couple of things I mentioned weren’t as big a part as they seem; they just took a while to explain. Overall, the story was a good advancement of the world set up in the first two books. I liked King’s Scrolls more, but I’m still looking forward to seeing where the story goes from here.

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Book Sale!

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In honor of the release of book #3 in the Pithea series (and what a good time for it, with so many of us snowed in), the book that kicks off the whole series is available for only $0.99 for the next 5 days, and my novelette The Triangle (unrelated to the series) is free now through Thursday! See below for links and a little more information.

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Power Released!

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My third full-length novel, book #3 in a series of futuristic speculative fiction with a Christian worldview, is now available to purchase in 3 formats on Amazon: Kindle, paperback, and hardcover! I’m so excited to see this series continue! See synopsis below and go here to buy the book.

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Power

For as long as Alexander Surett can remember, he’s planned to be a bounty hunter like his dad, bringing in criminals to stand trial. And when he gets his first taste of Power usage, he knows that the Power is what he will use to chase those criminals. But during the years-long training on the way to that goal, he stumbles onto an innocuous item from his dad’s past that leads him to question everything he’s been told. Soon it becomes clear that his family’s past tragedy is only the tip of the iceberg.

He brings his unwitting training partner, a Cleric named Leahna Isa, along on his search for answers, and together they attract the unwanted attention of the leader of a band of mercenaries. Rusalki Morano doesn’t like to be told “no,” and the consequences will have devastating effects on both Alexander’s and Leahna’s families—and all of Pithea.

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