NaNoWriMo Day 20

The Words: 2061 words today, in messy sprints throughout the evening where I kept getting distracted by things. But I passed 40k. Only 10 left to go! The draft will definitely need more words than that, though.

The Story: I took some time to explain how the justice system works in the main country of my books, though I’m not completely sure I explained it right. One more thing for revision time. And then the main character was told that he’s a person of interest in a crime.

Total word count: 40,861

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NaNoWriMo Day 19

The Words: 3399 words today, which is the highest daily count for me this month. I finally decided that I didn’t really care this year if I made the story last right up to the end of the month like I have the last few years. I almost didn’t even participate this year, so goodness knows just winning and having a finished first draft will be more than enough. Writing every single day simply isn’t a priority this year.

The Story: I just realized, literally when I was deciding what to write in this section, that I’m doing it again. I’m taking a character that’s not the MC and making her too big. She’s suspected of a crime, a situation that I didn’t plan to last more than a few days, and I’m dragging it out. Plus, the actual MC is sort of there during all of this, but more in the background. That needs to end immediately, he needs to come back to the foreground, and I need to move on.

Total word count: 38,800

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NaNoWriMo Day 18

The Words: Evening work meeting. Headache. 5-minute sprint. 301 words. Better than nothing.

The Story: I started (barely) into a sequence of scenes that will be a little more difficult to write, because they’re really vague in my outline. It’ll be like *gulp* pantsing! (I hate pantsing.)

Total word count: 35,601

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And this is a good time to watch episode 4 of the NaNoMusical, where things really heat up!

NaNoWriMo Day 17

The Words: 1592 total words, which were all written in the dark of my car while my daughter was at youth group. Our church is half an hour away from our home, so going home while she’s at youth group is pretty much a waste of time and gas. Because it’s November, I took my Neo with me and wrote for a good portion of the time I was waiting. Of course, it was dark, so I couldn’t see what I was doing. And I make more mistakes on the Neo than on the computer, so…it’ll be a really messy block of words. But at least I made good use of my time! I thought about writing more when I got home to get to my current daily goal of 2000, but decided to let it go. I’ve reached an open section of my outline that may be a bit slower to muddle through, so I’ll worry about that tomorrow.

The Story: Today’s writing was mostly characters discussing the situation at hand. They went over some of the things that had happened recently and tried to make some sense of it. I think they’re realizing things I didn’t expect them to realize, so I tried to make them look in another direction. In revision, I will either have to make sure they don’t get quite as many clues as they’ve gotten or let them understand some things earlier than I expected them to, and see what that does to the story.

Total word count: 35,100

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Book Review: Return to the Hiding Place

Return to the Hiding Place
by Hans Poley

My rating: 5 / 5
Genre: Memoir

During the time of Nazi persecution, a Christian Dutch family called the ten Booms welcome into their home various people who were hiding from the Nazis, both Jewish and not. 18-year-old Hans Poley was the first guest, hiding to avoid being sent to Germany to do hard labor in replacement of Germans who’d been sent to fight. Here he tells the story of his time at the ten Booms’ house and his own arrest that took him to a prison, then a concentration camp.

Having read The Hiding Place earlier this year, it was really interesting to see the Beje and the ten Boom family from the perspective of one of their “guests.” Not only does Hans Poley echo Corrie ten Boom’s assertions about the incredible faith of her father and sister, he shows Corrie herself as more open and giving than she portrayed herself in some areas. For example, when her room was chosen as the location for the secret room in her book, she tried to protest it. According to Poley, however, she “readily agreed.” I think we’d all be surprised to find out how others view us, compared to how we view ourselves, and in this case, Corrie ten Boom may have been a little hard on herself. Another small thing I noticed that didn’t match up between the books is that both authors claim to be the one who gave Eusi, one of the most prominent long-term Jewish guests, his fake name, and I wonder if this, and any other possible discrepancy, is simply due to faulty memories.

Yet again I was struck by how incredibly selfless this family was, giving up their own comfort and safety to help so many others. And Casper ten Boom, Corrie’s father, is even more inspirational to me after reading this. He repeatedly expressed a desire to help the Jewish people as if it weren’t even a choice to make. If you’ve read The Hiding Place, you should consider reading this too. Overall, though, I recommend it to anyone interested in true Holocaust accounts, especially those from a Christian worldview.

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NaNoWriMo Day 16

The Words: 2066 total words, most of which, just like the last two days, was written during 2 sprints with my daughter. Nothing particularly special to today’s writing, but I’m plugging ahead, one small chunk at a time.

The Story: I continued with a few scenes from the antagonist’s POV for most of today’s words. Though she’s not actually the “head honcho,” she’s definitely the best choice for a POV character. I’m really enjoying watching how the behind the scenes action plays out from her perspective, though I think some of what I’m writing is me working it out as I go, even though I thought I had it worked out when I outlined it. It might have still been a little messy, so I’m figuring out how it will work while writing the first draft.

Total word count: 33,508

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NaNoWriMo Day 15

The Words: 2195 total words, most of which was again done during 2 sprints with my daughter. And since I was close to 2000, I wrote a little more after she went to bed. I think I’m going to try to keep 2000 as my daily word goal for now, to try to avoid running out of story before the end of the month.

The Story: Most of today’s writing was from the POV of the antagonist, a perspective I added since the first attempt at drafting this novel. I initially didn’t intend for it to remain part of the story, but figured it would help to write it so I could better understand how the intricacies of the plot fit together. But the more I write of it the more it feels like part of the story, so we’ll have to see how it turns out. Besides, without it, the draft might be a little too short.

Total word count: 31,442

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Book Review: Poison at the Pump

Poison at the Pump
The Imagination Station #25
by Chris Brack & Sheila Seifert

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Historical children’s fiction, Christian

In this first of a 3-part story arc, cousins Beth and Patrick are tasked with finding a mystery liquid in London during the cholera epidemic of 1854. They are separated at first and meet historical figures like Dr. John Snow and Curate Henry Whitehead who played important roles in history. But when Patrick learns that he drank water from the contaminated pump, he’s not certain he’ll be able to make it back from 1854 alive.

I actually read part 3 of this story arc (which, in turn, is part of a much larger series) first, then decided to go back and read the preceding stories. I did not like this one quite as much as the third in the arc, which might have been due to the respective subject matters as much as anything. I did still like it, though, and appreciate the way these stories bring somewhat lesser-known pockets of history to life for children. The doctor who first posited that cholera was spread by contaminated water, rather than through the air, for example, is certainly not one that kids this age are likely to have heard about. For that matter, I didn’t know about him either, though I can’t guarantee I didn’t read about him in passing during a history class in school and simply forgot about him. But that’s all the more reason this story is a nice way of making historical events and figures more memorable.

I’m a little confused about the premise for the series, the Imagination Station, and how it works. That’s likely due to not having read the rest of the series, but I did think I knew enough about the Imagination Station from Adventures in Odyssey as a whole to know that it’s…well…all in the imagination. And yet, this story made it seem like the kids were actually sent back in time. So I’m not sure if I misread the book/it was just confusing in that area, or if they’ve changed the way the Imagination Station works (though then the name wouldn’t really make sense either). That confusion aside, I think the book is a great read for kids up to age 12.

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NaNoWriMo Day 14

The Words: 1353 total words, done during 2 sprints with my daughter early in the evening. I decided not to go for more. It’s definitely been a slower-paced NaNo for me this year.

The Story: A pivotal moment for the story happened in today’s writing, but I wasn’t really feeling it. I think it’s because of the difficulty I’ve had planning this story in a way that will make it work better than the first time I tried to write it. Hopefully I won’t struggle too much to push past this part tomorrow.

Total word count: 29,247

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NaNoWriMo Day 13

The Words: 2910 total words, my highest daily word count this month. I also passed the halfway point! I started out with a solo 15-minute sprint before supper, then after supper my daughter wanted to write together. She’s a bit behind, so she wanted to get as much in as she could before bedtime. I did a 10-minute and a 30-minute sprint with her alongside the @NaNoWordSprints feed on Twitter, and then she went on to do a couple more short sprints by herself when I realized how many words I had for the day.

The Story: I finished most of the scenes I’d brainstormed last Saturday to fill out the word count more. I’ve left one because I’m not sure yet how it will fit into the story, or even who it will involve. I got to the end of the last of those scenes in the middle of a sprint, but I wasn’t prepared for that. I didn’t know where I’d last left off in the bulk of the story, so I had to go back and find it. Then I finished another scene and wasn’t prepared to go on in my outline, so I had to load up Scrivener during a sprint. A little messy, but now I’m back to the story proper. On the other hand, I liked writing those other scenes, which are connections to the larger series. I actually considered keeping the last one going past what I really needed for the story, since I was in the middle of a sprint at the time and was enjoying the topic at hand. But I didn’t.

Total word count: 27,894

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