Daily Challenge Check-in: February 1, 2015

Words: 584 revising “Adventures in Pithea.” My editing group has discovered that the discussion and revision of the actual story always goes so much faster than the discussion and revision of any story-world mechanics. There are a few places in the story with a page or so of pure info-dump, and it bogs down our progress. The exposition-filled bridge between parts 1 and 2 has been set aside by the group, because we want to wait until we have more time than the normal few hours a week to work on it. We have our second marathon meeting planned for this coming Saturday, so I went over the section we set aside and tried to iron out huge wrinkles in it in preparation for Saturday.