1. What inspired the idea for your novel, and how long have you had the idea?
It has been a long time coming. The inspiration (which feels more like necessity than inspiration) came from the adaptation of some old fanfiction of mine to a new, from-scratch story world. Some of the things that made sense in the fanfiction couldn’t be explained naturally and organically in the closer-to-real-life story world, and so the need for a very powerful, over-arching villain came to be.
I have a vast, intricate plan of up to (so far) 7 books that all take place in the same story world, in a smallish period of time, and with some of the same characters. This story, which encompasses most of the others, was always out there, but I figured it’d be one of the last story arcs in my list that I would get to writing. I think that was simply because I was scared of it. Until I committed to writing this story, and outlined it, gave Vin a real life, I didn’t have to think about what he was actually up to. But the truth is, I should have done this story years ago, because some of the other books hinge on this one, and if something in another story that involves Vin doesn’t actually work in his story, that affects the other book. And what if I’ve published it, and it’s out there now? I’m not really interested in doing the whole ret-con thing.
So that’s why it’s time to write this story this year.
2. Describe what your novel is about!
I haven’t done nearly enough planning yet (just decided to write this 2 days ago), so all of this is subject to change.
First, you should know that this story takes place approximately 2000 years in the future. That part is not subject to change.
The story will show the inner workings of an obsessed man as he tries to become perfect—just like his father always wanted him to be. In his quest for perfection, he stumbles across a way to become incredibly, dangerously, illegally powerful—more powerful than anyone in his country, his region, and presumably, the world.
Then he learns about two men who have joined together to defeat a beast that was thought unbeatable, and he realizes that as he pursues perfection in the form of ultimate power, these self-righteous men might decide to oppose him. He decides that the first thing he must do is find a way to keep that from happening.
A subplot (how sub this plot will be, I don’t know yet) involves a man who had just begun to find happiness in a life tinged with tragedy and loneliness, who suddenly finds that everything he cared about has been stripped away.
3. What is your book’s aesthetic? Use words or photos or whatever you like!
4. Introduce us to each of your characters!
Vin – He’s not trying to take over the world; he only wants to find some peace. His father died before Vin could reach the level of perfection that the older man wanted from his son, but his continued striving quickly reaches the point of obsession.
Rogan – He never expected to find “normal” in his life, but since he did, he certainly hoped to keep it. Now that he’s lost it, the loneliness feels familiar…almost comfortable. But maybe…just maybe, it doesn’t have to last.
Penny – It turns out that being stalked by a madman, who she is just learning had his hand in more events in her life than she could have realized, was just the beginning of her problem. She’s still recovering from a recent upheaval in her life, and the last thing she needs is to have someone making her feel guilty for her choices in life.
Drear – He is the narrator of the book. Though truthfully, he is not present for most of these events, he has compiled interviews, letters, journals, and anything else he can, to find the truth behind these events and to present them to the reader.
5. How do you prepare to write? (Outline, research, stocking up on chocolate, howling, etc.?)
Things like this, for one thing. Until 2 days ago, I still didn’t know what I was going to write. When I started thinking about doing this story, I wasn’t sold right away. I had some free time while waiting for a meeting to start at work, and decided to delve a little into the mind of one of the primary characters (Vin) to see if I could come up with motives for what he ultimately does, other than, “Because he has to.”
By the time I had finished that mere 500-word exercise, I had his main motivation (his dad driving him to be perfect). But it’s still a very shallow understanding of this man who, most likely, will drive the plot.
So I’ve filled out this questionnaire in the hopes of discovering more about this story. I’ll do free writing with Vin and the overall story in mind. I will possibly answer other question lists like this one, even if I do end up skipping some questions because they just don’t make sense for my character(s).
Even though we’re only 3 weeks away from November 1st, I’m still very much in the discovery period of this story, which is not where I need to be when NaNo starts. But I will do freewriting and brainstorming, fill out my timeline, and just…discover.
And then sometime during the last week of October, I’ll make an outline.
6. What are you most looking forward to about this novel?
I am most looking forward to being able to work with Rogan again. He’s far too important of a character in my mind to have been in only one book so far.
7. List 3 things about your novel’s setting.
Graveyards, underground lair, city streets
8. What’s your character’s goal and who (or what) stands in the way?
His goal is to reach perfection, and one single little girl stands in his way, albeit indirectly.
9. How does your protagonist change by the end of the novel?
It doesn’t take long before “perfection” morphs into “power.” He then has to do away with any threats to his power, a goal that he is still able to justify. But by the end of the story, his obsession has turned into a pure hatred for his nemesis, and then the only thing he cares about is destroying her life.
10. What are your book’s themes? How do you want readers to feel when the story is over?
There’s a major good vs. evil theme in my story. It is going to be a dark book in many ways. I want readers to feel shocked, amazed, maybe even confused? (I’m really not good with themes, whether in my own writing or in others’.)
For anyone out there who is participating in NaNoWriMo, feel free to check out my series of tips and tricks for the month, and also to add me as a writing buddy! (Let me know you came from here, and I’ll add you back!)
8 thoughts on “Beautiful Books 2017”
oooo your story sounds awesome! I love the setting – and the mc sounds really deep and complex! Basically I LOVE THIS IDEA. Good luck writing it!
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He gets deeper and more complex every day. Just today I realized it’s not ultimate power that he’s after. He is trying to “fix” the world, make everyone happy, basically save them from themselves, and power is just a vehicle through which he can accomplish that. He’s expanded his need for perfection to include everyone else. Who knows what else I’ll discover.
Thank you for your comment! I am equal parts excited and trepidatious to write this (maybe not equal parts).
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Aaaaahhh that would make sense! If he wants to make people happy then power would be the way to do that, I suppose. It’s so cool how characters expand and develop as you plan! Good luck 🙂
I’m no psychologist, but when I can come up with motives for my characters that feel realistic, I’m usually pretty happy.
Wow, your project sounds really cool!!!! It kind of makes me of Vicious from V.E. Schwab although I’ve never actually read it, so I don’t know how on point I am hahah. Good luck with your project!!!!
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I looked up the book you mentioned, and from the synopsis, I can see what you mean. There are definitely some similarities. After reading some reviews, I really want to read that book now. I’m also very intimidated to write my own dark, anti-hero story now, after seeing how much people love hers, lol, but that’s okay.
This sounds fascinating! I love how your villain is the mc and I like that he doesn’t just want to be evil cause he can be. I like the fact that you’ve given him good motivation. Good luck with Nano!
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Thank you. For years now, he’s been out there in the distance, just evil because I needed him to be. But I knew that to write this story, he had to have a reason. The more I learn about that reason, the more I kinda regret thinking about him as just the “big bad” all these years.
Good luck with your NaNo too!