Daily Writing Check-in: May 27, 2019

Words/Time:  1 hour, 30 minutes doing preliminary work for the new outline of “Protector.”

I finished reading the first draft, making a few small changes along the way. Then I had to analyze the best way to proceed with sorting out which scenes can be kept and which are not related to the main plot, or an important-enough sub-plot and have to be cut. The way this story is laid out makes it difficult to wrap my head around some of this, so I decided the next step is to actually put the scenes into chronological order. That will help me a lot later anyway, because I’ll need to put this story into my timeline of all of the Pithea books at some point anyway (probably before I’m done re-outlining it).

The scenes are now in chronological order, so tomorrow I’ll start color-coding them by plot/sub-plot.

A Monday Moment: Explosion

Monday Moment

The door was slightly open when he reached it, so he slowed his approach. It had been two weeks since he’d last been to the apartment, and he really hoped he hadn’t left it unlocked and open for two weeks. What sort of creatures might have ventured into the warm environment?

As he touched the door handle, he had a thought—why had no one going by seen the open door and decided to close it? That was exactly the kind of community he—

A ball of fire erupted from the doorway as soon as he pulled on the handle. He was sent flying back and landed on the other side of the dirt road.

He heard shouting and running. The building was on fire! It would spread to the other buildings if they didn’t put it out. He tried to get up to help. He felt a pair of hands on him, keeping him down.

He tried to speak—to insist that he be allowed up.

“You need to stay still,” the familiar voice of one of his neighbors said.

As he lay there, unable to move or speak, and not able to narrow down where the pain was actually originating, he saw a man. The man was not running around or shouting like those around him. He was staring at Nathan. He looked angry.

“There, that man, someone needs to apprehend him,” Nathan attempted to say. He only managed to cough, which sent new waves of pain through his body.

“Nathan, stop moving,” his neighbor instructed. “A medic is on the way.”

When Nathan looked again, the man was walking away. He noted the insignia on the man’s sleeve—the mark of Grouca. The king would not be pleased.


Prompt used: Your house explodes just as you were about to enter the door.

Daily Writing Check-in: May 26, 2019

Words/Time:  52 minutes doing preliminary work for the new outline of “Protector” and 239 words of writing practice with a prompt.

I continued reading the first draft, making a few small changes along the way. I’m on page 154 out of 170 of this read-through. I’ve also been writing down notes of things that will need revised later, when I get to that point. But first, I’ll have to decide what to keep and what needs to go…and before that, I just need to get through the first draft.

Daily Writing Check-in: May 25, 2019

Words/Time:  2 hours doing preliminary work for the new outline of “Protector”.

I continued reading the first draft, making a few small changes along the way. I’m on page 127 out of 171 of this read-through. I feel like the reading of this first draft is taking me longer than it did on the other goals in my current list. I don’t know if that’s true, or just how it feels. If it is true, the only reason I can think might be causing it is that I’m moving text around as I go, to put it in the order that I decided scenes should go (I wrote a lot of them out of order), and in the process, still deciding the order. That’s slowing me down, but I didn’t think it was that much.

Daily Writing Check-in: May 24, 2019

Words/Time:  47 minutes doing preliminary work for the new outline of “Protector”.

I continued reading the first draft, making a few small changes along the way. I’m on page 95 out of 172 of this read-through. I don’t have a lot to say about today’s work, other than that I’m still really enjoying the story and it just got even better, as 2 of my all-time favorite characters just made their appearance.

Daily Writing Check-in: May 23, 2019

Words/Time:  1 hour, 23 minutes doing preliminary work for the new outline of “Protector”.

I continued reading the first draft, making a few small changes along the way. I’m on page 78 out of 172 of this read-through. After several short days of work, today felt great. I was a little slowed down by having to move scenes around in my draft, to match how I had ordered the scenes in Scrivener. And I actually changed them there a bit too, to structure a few scenes better. I am really enjoying how this is shaping up, even knowing that I’ll have some big decisions ahead of me about which scenes need cut to accommodate the change from a pure romance to something much more than that. But I’m enjoying it for now.

Daily Writing Check-in: May 22, 2019

Words/Time:  15 minutes doing preliminary work for the new outline of “Protector”.

I continued reading the first draft, making a few small changes along the way. I’m on page 61 out of 172 of this read-through. I cut today even shorter than yesterday. I was gone most of the day today, and I am just completely dead. I probably should have just skipped today, but I’ll be gone a lot of tomorrow too, so skipping a few days in a row when I’ve done so well this month wasn’t preferable.

Daily Writing Check-in: May 21, 2019

Words/Time:  26 minutes doing preliminary work for the new outline of “Protector”.

I continued reading the first draft, making a few small changes along the way. I’m on page 57 out of 172 of this read-through. I cut today short because I have to get up early tomorrow and am very tired from today too. I’ll be gone all day tomorrow and don’t know for sure what time I’ll get home, but I’m hoping I’ll at least have enough time and energy to do a little work. We’ll see.

Daily Writing Check-in: May 20, 2019

Words/Time:  51 minutes doing preliminary work for the new outline of “Protector”.

I continued reading the first draft, making a few small changes along the way. I’m on page 50 out of 172 of this read-through. I also spent some time rethinking where some of the locations in the story will actually be in relation to the main country. I like my new plans, but they may yet change again.