Daily Writing Check-in: January 7, 2019

Words/Time: 32 minutes doing some early revision of “Pursuit of Power.”

I completed 1 item in my list of things to revise, which was the last one I needed to do before I start to read through the entire story, making broad changes and taking notes for other issues that need addressed. I’m going to try to stick to mostly reading and making notes  to change things later, because the more I stop to fix things along the way, the more disjointed the read-through will be.

I took the last 3 days as a break from writing, at first because I was sick, and then just because it was nice to relax a bit after the busyness of the holidays. I also realized late in the day that it was Monday, and decided it would be better to skip this week’s Monday Moment post. I certainly hope this lowered desire to do writing work isn’t indicative of a break coming already, but I will endeavor to push on.

Daily Writing Check-in: January 3, 2019

Words/Time: 30 minutes doing some early revision of “Pursuit of Power.”

I completed 1 item in my list of things to revise, which was finishing the scene I started yesterday, and figuring out how to make it fit into the story. I only have a few items left on the list before I’m finally ready to just read through the whole story again. I believe it will be the first time reading it from beginning to end since I wrote it. I have 8 things on my list that I will be watching to revise on the way, and will of course revise other things that come up along the way. I’ll take notes on larger issues that aren’t necessary to change now, for this early revision, and I’m hoping that by the time I’m done with that step, I will be able to call this first revision finished, and allow a person or two to read the book.

Daily Writing Check-in: January 2, 2019

Words/Time: 357 words written, which took maybe 15 minutes (I didn’t pay close attention to the clock, but I’m calling it 15 for my goal tracker.)

I was pretty happy to do any work today. A stomach bug worked its way through my family over the last week, and today it hit me. I was asleep most of the afternoon and evening. Even when I was awake, I didn’t have my list of things to revise, because I left it at my parents’ house yesterday. My husband brought it home this evening, and I managed to squeeze in a little work, which entailed writing a new scene to include in “Pursuit of Power.”

Daily Writing Check-in: January 1, 2019

Words/Time: 42 minutes doing some early revision of “Pursuit of Power.”

I completed 4 items in my list of things to revise again, which made me happy! Though I added yet another item to the bottom of the list. It seems like it’s never going to end, and this is just the early revision.

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I am starting a new goal tracker on the NaNoWriMo website for January. December went so well that I have decided to up my daily goal to an average of a half hour a day. I’m not sure this is necessary, because I also know that if I start to fall behind, I won’t push myself to catch back up. That goes against the nature of this daily writing challenge. And during December, I definitely didn’t have to push myself to reach the daily goal more than a very small amount. But I’m doing it anyway, just in case it helps.

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A Monday Moment: Batman

My friends and I stopped in the coffee shop to sit and drink and talk. I almost ran into Jessica, who had stopped in the doorway. She ushered us back outside quickly.

“Batman’s in there,” she whispered frantically. Her face was red and there were tears forming in her eyes.

“What?” Grace asked. “Seriously, why’d you make us come back out here?”

“Seriously.” Jessica pointed at the door. “Batman is in there.”

“What does that mean?” I asked. Jessica always was one who would say something cryptic and expect us to follow her thinking.

“It means—” She opened the door so we could see inside. “—freaking Batman is in the coffee shop!”

Seated at a table not far from the door was a man wearing black clothes and a black hat. He was watching us peek in the door at him, and I wondered just how crazy he thought we were.

Jessica shut the door and we backed away as we saw someone else walking toward it.

“So…he’s Batman why?” Grace asked.

“What do you mean, ‘why?’ He had the whole get-up.”

Grace looked at me and I sighed.

“A black hat and sweater aren’t exactly a Batman outfit,” I said. “Maybe he’s just not a colorful person.”

“That wasn’t a sweater! Or a hat. He had the mask and all. You guys didn’t notice? Over in the back corner?”

“Oh…no, I was looking at the guy right up front here.”

I was looking at the guy in the corner,” Grace said. “But isn’t Batman a fictional guy?”

Jessica stared at Grace silently for a few seconds before looking back at me. “Okay, look in there again, but this time look in the back.”

“I don’t want to stand out here looking in there again like some idiot. Let’s just go in.”

“But—”

The door opened then, and out walked a man in a full Batman outfit—cape, cowl, and all.

He turned our way and walked by us while we stared at him.

“Ladies,” he said in a gravelly voice.

After he left, Grace whispered, “He is Batman.”


Prompt used: You walk into a coffee shop and see Batman sitting in the corner booth.

Daily Writing Check-in: December 30, 2018

Words/Time: 1 hour, 2 minutes doing some early revision of “Pursuit of Power.”

Most of that time was spent working on an item in my second list of things to revise, the same item as yesterday. While trying to add some glimpses into the personal life of my secondary main character, I had to make a small edit to my timeline. I realized that she thought of the main character as too young for something he wanted to do, but I wasn’t sure he was really young enough. I tried to change his age, but that didn’t really work out.

In dealing with this issue, I realized that the secondary main character is too young, considering that she was younger than some of the side characters in “Pithea” that she’s definitely meant to be older and more experienced than. So I aged her a bit.

Then I added in one of the scenes I wrote as writing practice a few years ago, which I think is great for the story. Tomorrow, I’ll add another scene (and probably play with the timeline a bit more).

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I doubled my goal of time spent working on writing this month!

Daily Writing Check-in: December 29, 2018

Words/Time: 44 minutes doing some early revision of “Pursuit of Power.”

Most of that time was spent working on an item in my second list of things to revise. The plan is to add in some glimpses into the secondary main character’s personal life, since she is not shown in that way very much so far. I’ve already written a scene or two that I can include, but for the first one, I have to get the area where it’s going to go ready. This involves once again comparing a scene that is in both “Pursuit of Power” and “Pithea,” and figuring out how much of it belongs in which book. This is where I will continue tomorrow as well.

Daily Writing Check-in: December 28, 2018

Words/Time: 49 minutes doing some early revision of “Pursuit of Power.”

Most of that time was spent finishing item 3 in my list of difficult things to revise, finishing revising the scene that I moved over from “Pithea.” That got me through 6 out of 8 items on the list. The other 2 I am saving for later.

Next, I am starting on a new list. While I was working on the items from my list of things to fix during this revision, I came up with some more things that needed to be done, and wrote them down for later. Now I’m starting on that list, which currently has 16 items on it. Today, I fixed the 1st and 4th items on the list.

After I’m done with this list, or perhaps before I’m completely done, I’ll read through the entire draft again to find any other glaring issues that need fixed before I’m willing to let anyone at all read it. There are a few items on this list that might better be fixed while reading through the draft, rather than trying to find all of the places the issue exists by skimming or jumping around.

Daily Writing Check-in: December 27, 2018

Words/Time: 51 minutes doing some early revision of “Pursuit of Power.”

That time was spent on item 3 in my list of difficult things to revise. This entailed copying & pasting a scene from “Pithea” into “Pursuit of Power,” because it turns out it really belongs there. However, the scene was written from the perspective of the wrong character now, so I’m making edits to help with that. I got sidetracked by trying to answer a continuity question that maybe isn’t important in this early revision.