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Book Review: The Magic Factory

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The Magic Factory
Oliver Blue and the School for Seers #1
by Morgan Rice

My rating: 3 / 5
Genre: Middle grade fantasy

As the perpetual new kid, bullied by peers as well as his own brother, 11-year-old Oliver has only his inventions to keep him sane. Things start to change, though, when Oliver notices he seems to be able to make things happen and then visits the old, decrepit factory of his hero, inventor Armando Illstrom. Oliver learns that he has powers, but before he can learn any more, tragedy strikes and Oliver is on his own.

Overall, this book felt like a mixture of Harry Potter and Miss Peregrine’s Peculiar Children with some steampunk elements. I didn’t care for what felt like a Harry Potter rip-off in the beginning, with Oliver being bullied by his older brother, seemingly uncared-about by his parents, who favored the brother, and having to live in an alcove… Even the school that Oliver ends up at later in the book didn’t feel remotely as much like a copy of HP as that beginning. And it does, indeed, move on from that similar feel. In fact, but the end of the book, I found that I had enjoyed it more than I’d expected to once I’d gotten a few chapters in.

Oliver meets others like him, called Seers, learns a tiny bit about how to use his powers, and then is thrust into a life-or-death situation that only he can take care of. The author’s inventiveness in the school itself was probably my favorite thing about the book. The bully at his new school (since, of course, there always has to be one) and his motivations were a bit weak. And the whole book could have used some more editing, with some verbal tic-like phrases here and then that detracted from the flow. I don’t normally hold self-published books to as high a standard as traditionally published books, but there’s still some burden of responsibility to smooth out the prose.

I’m glad I read this book, though I don’t plan to continue the series. In the end, though, I would say this book is better than average amongst self-published books I’ve read.

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Book Review: Escape from Warsaw

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Escape from Warsaw
by Ian Serraillier

My rating: 3 / 5
Genre: Middle grade historical fiction

I thought this book might be a sort of introduction to fiction set during WWII and the Holocaust for my daughter, since these are subjects I’ve been very interested in since I was a teenager. However, while the book isn’t bad, it’s very shallow overall. Most of the story takes place after the war has ended, jumping forward 2 years from when the children’s mother is arrested early in the book. And the title implies that the children struggle to escape their home city, but the story is more of a journey across a war-torn landscape, through multiple countries from Poland to Switzerland, where they’re sure their dad is waiting. It’s a story of survival and relying on the kindness of strangers, of family helping each other at all costs, and of children who are displaced by the war. It’s almost a series of vignettes, which makes sense, since the author used real accounts of things that happened to people around this time period, piecing them together into a mostly cohesive story of one family trying to reunite. However, at 13, I would say my daughter is already too old for this book, though I can see it being a decent one for younger kids. As a side note, apparently the book was originally published under the title The Silver Sword, which I think was a much more apt name for the story (especially considering that the actual escape from Warsaw was quick and not super difficult).

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Book Review: Greetings from Witness Protection!

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Greetings from Witness Protection!
by Jake Burt

My rating: 5 / 5
Genre: Middle grade fiction

Thanks to years in foster care making her tough and street smart, Nicki Demere is asked by the U.S. Marshals to join a family of three that needs to be protected from their criminal family, camouflaging them as a family of four. As Charlotte Trevor, she does what she can to help protect her new family while also being the most average student possible. But before long, all of the Trevors learn how difficult it can be to outrun one’s past.

I don’t know why it’s so much harder to figure out how to start a review when I like a book than it is when I dislike a book. I guess because it just doesn’t seem good enough to start out with, “This book is great!” But this one really is. I don’t know how plausible the premise is, but the author sure made it seem realistic, considering that Nicki isn’t the only kid tapped for “Project Family.” From the orphanage to training with the Marshals and finally to her new home, Nicki makes an impression with everyone along the way. I didn’t always feel like her voice was all that realistic to a 13-year-old, but on the other hand, her rough history makes her anything but average. And the way her past affects her in the present was written well and adds to her being quite the sympathetic protagonist.

There were some things about this book that were predictable (at least for me, reading it as an adult) but at least one thing that happened that I did not expect at all. Throw in few emotional moments, a style that’s easy to read, and suspense built in the form of brief mentions of the criminals trying to track down the hidden family, and it’s easy to see why this book hooked me. There were even several laugh-out-loud moments here and there. I read this at the same time that my 13-year-old daughter did, and she loved it too. She agrees that it was suspenseful and thrilling. High endorsement from the target audience!

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Book Review: Beneath the Swirling Sky

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Beneath the Swirling Sky
The Restorationists #1
by Carolyn Leiloglou

My rating: 5 / 5
Genre: Christian children’s fantasy

Though named after Vincent van Gogh and loving to paint when he was younger, 13-year-old Vincent wants nothing to do with art anymore, after realizing that he’s not as good as he hoped he’d be. So when his parents leave him with his great-uncle Leo, a painting restorer, during spring break, Vincent expects to be bored. He expects to be lectured about art. What he doesn’t expect is to fall into a painting of van Gogh’s Starry Night and find out that he has the ability to travel through paintings. Then his little sister gets lost inside the same painting, and it’s up to Vincent and his strange cousin Georgia to find her.

Full disclosure: I am not an art lover; in fact, I’ve never had more than a cursory interest in even famous paintings. Yet I really enjoyed this book and can say that one does not need to be really into van Gogh, Rembrandt, etc. to read and like the book. The author does a good job of allowing the reader to tap into the enthusiasm of the characters in the book, even Vincent, who tries to convince himself he doesn’t care about art anymore. The focus on that in the narration got a little repetitive and almost caused me to lower my rating by half a star. However, the story and characters outside of that, and the payoff to Vincent’s attempt at being dispassionate about art are all wonderful, so I couldn’t bear to give the book anything less than 5 stars.

As Vincent and Georgia try to track down Vincent’s little sister, they come across others that can travel through paintings—others whose intentions are not exactly noble. And Vincent comes face-to-face with his own worst qualities in a very real way. But in a fantastical twist, he also comes face-to-face with the One who sees everything he is and still loves him. I don’t want to say anymore about this, because it was the absolute high point of the book for me, the moment that I knew I was going to recommend this book to everyone, young and old, and that I will read it again and again in the future.

Thank you to Netgalley and WaterBrook & Multnomah for providing me a copy of this book to review.
Publication date: September 12, 2023

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Book Review: The Big Lie

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The Big Lie
McGee and Me! #1
by Bill Myers & Ken C. Johnson

My rating: 5 / 5
Genre: Children’s Christian fiction

Talk about reliving my childhood! As is the case with so many Christian children’s video series that were around in the 90s (Last Chance Detectives, Superbook, The Flying House, etc.), my family owned only a couple of the McGee and Me! videos. Which means that the ones we did own were watched over and over, and I can now quote quite a few lines from each of them. This first book in the book series that came out around the same time as the videos is one of the titles we owned as a video, so I know it pretty well. And I remember how sad it always made me when Nick (the MC) came upon his Native American neighbor after his house had been vandalized. The book also does a good job of bringing out those emotions, as well as putting across the message that one little white lie can do a lot of damage. Though McGee, Nick’s animated friend, isn’t as enjoyable on the page as he is on the screen, this is overall a good short story full of heart. Though these books may not be easy to find anymore, if you do have the chance to read this book or procure it for an 8-10-year-old child, I recommend it.

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