Dream Every Day: Fanfiction That Isn’t

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Full disclosure: I used to write fanfiction. A lot. All for one MMORPG called Ragnarok Online, which my husband and I played for around a year. It was where my love for writing fiction resparked, after having dimmed during high school. I’m never sure what’s going to happen when I say I write fanfiction. Plenty of people have no real opinion. Some say they have written or currently are writing fanfiction as well. And some scoff, laugh, roll eyes, or quietly assume the worst about what that means. There are many misconceptions about fanfiction, but that’s not what this post is about.

This post is also not about convincing you to write fanfiction—at least, not precisely.

One of the biggest benefits of fanfiction is that some of the work is already done for you. Characters are already in play, relationships built (or at least started), sometimes a plot is left dangling that you can pick up and run with. At the very least, in the case of a mostly story-less, character-less world like was in the game I wrote for, a setting has already been established—a whole world built, with mechanics in place that I didn’t have to create myself.

Don’t get me wrong; I’m not saying fanfic writers are lazy, but let’s face it—it’s easier to start writing when some of the work has been done. And that’s where I’m going with this post.

As writers, we are often reflections of what we take in. My dad is a blacksmith, and so is my main character’s dad. I have a character that I created long ago who is jovial, always enthusiastic, outgoing, and sometimes annoying; in recent years I actually met someone in real life who reminds me of that character, so now when I write that character, I keep this other person in mind as a guide.

Errol

Now when I write Aeldrim’s dialog, I think to myself, “What would Errol say?”

The same can be said for books we read, movies or television we watch, or even music we listen to.

A major character in my story “Outcast” was partially inspired by Nathaniel Hawthorne’s The Scarlet Letter, mostly in that I decided to give her a physical mark that reminded people of her mistake.

I have grand plans for a dramatic scene in a story that I never finished when I was writing fanfiction (but will likely pick back up someday and finish in my new story world) that was heavily inspired by a song called “Letters From War” by Mark Schultz.

And the entire premise of a short story I wrote years back was drawn upon the question, “What if the girl had to save the guy?” which I asked myself after watching a movie with my sisters. (For years now I’ve been certain it was the movie Last Holiday that led me to that, but after rewatching the climax to that movie, I don’t see how it could have been. So now I’m not sure what the movie was.)

As a whole, writers get ideas and inspiration from everyday life all the time, so none of this is special. Most writers that I talk to seem to always be neck-deep in ideas that they have to choose between when deciding what to work on next. This advice is more about what you can do if you’re looking for new material. A fresh idea, a different direction to take your plot, or a new character to introduce.

In the book Now Write! Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror, there is an article about taking an existing story and simply adding a different element to it. Examples were moving the story to space, adding dragons, setting it in an alternate dimension, or adding time travel. The idea is not to literally rewrite the same story with the same exact plot with that one added element, but to use that as a starting point. Once you start plotting and/or writing, you make it your own. By the time you’re done, it will most likely look very different from the original.

And that is really where I’m going with this post. Take a cue from fanfic writers and let other stories around you inspire you. What you liked or didn’t like about them, what you’d change or how you think it would have continued.

Dream for yourself: For the rest of this post, understand that “story” can refer to any work of fiction in any medium—print, big or small screen (even a single episode out of a series), or audio.

Think of a story you really liked, but just didn’t like the ending. Or wish a character had been given a different side-plot. How would you have done it differently? What would have been better?

Or think of a story you absolutely hated. Starting with the same premise and same characters (or different characters, if they were part of what made the story so horrible), rewrite it so it’s better.

What character do you really despise? I don’t mean the kind that are meant to be hated, but one that fell flat for you. The character who grated on your nerves. Who was meant to be a comic relief but was just stupid. Or maybe one who was indeed an antagonist, but the villain factor was taken too far. Even a protagonist who you just didn’t sympathize with and couldn’t care less if they lived or died. What would you have done differently? How would you have made that character better for the story?

Yes, this is what some fanfiction writers do. But it doesn’t have to turn into literal fanfiction. If you do not purposely hold yourself to the world the original story is set in, you can make it your own. Or simply use these questions to spark an entirely different idea.

So how about you? Are you now or have you ever been a fanfic writer? Have you noticed real life or fictional stories seeping their way into your writing?

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 11, 2015

Words/Time: 997 words of something completely unrelated to anything I should be working on. Not even fiction. But still writing. My husband and son are on a camping trip this weekend and my daughter and I spent some quality time together. Then I started getting a headache that was far too reminiscent of yesterday’s nightmare. So I decided to take it easy on editing work today. What I did write (which was a new blog post in the “Write Every Day” series) qualifies for my daily challenge to do some sort of writing work every day, but doesn’t qualify for Camp NaNo. So now I have a day to make up for.

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 10, 2015

Words/Time: 1 hour, adding revisions for “Pithea” that were made on paper into the computer. I’m glad I was able to do anything, considering the massive headache/migraine I had from 9 am until 6 pm. I was just a useless lump during that whole time. Fortunately, I had enough revisions built up that this took a while to do, so I didn’t have to do much thinking for my evening’s work.

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 9, 2015

Words/Time: 1 hour, revising “Pithea.” Transportation vagueness has been cleaned up. Aeldrim has rightfully stayed where they found him, rather than traveling with the group only to leave and go back where they found him a few minutes later, for no real purpose. And Blackthore has another chance to tell Missy how he found out something was going on and came to help, a conversation that will be made less confusing by Missy actually knowing who Drear is already.

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 8, 2015

Words/Time: 1 hour, revising “Pithea.” Moving right along with the story, as Missy contemplates her future in more detail. Mr. Bower, the man who is challenging her pretense that she has it all figured out, is coming across as a combination between a wise old man and a recruiter. I may be overselling him, but it’s hard to tell. So far, my TCSTB cohorts haven’t had a problem with him, and they pick up on all sorts of issues I hope they won’t notice.

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 7, 2015

Words/Time: 3769 words revising “Pithea” with two of my sisters over Skype. Also known as the 46th meeting of the Tri-County Sisterhood of the Traveling Book. We got through just under 13 pages of double-spaced text. That may not sound like much, but there are three of us going over every aspect of this story. It is the most intensive revision I will probably ever do on this book. It’s taken us longer than I’d ever hoped to do this, but we’re around halfway through part 3 of 4, so we’re definitely getting there. And along the way, we’re fixing issues in my story world and solidifying weak characters and plot points. Our average page count for one of these meetings is 5-6, so 13 was great.

The first week of Camp NaNo is over, so here’s a quick update on my progress–my goal for the month is to work for an average of an hour per day on my revision. So far, I’m right on par with that. It’s not nearly as exciting as having a word count to share, but I’m still happy that I haven’t skipped any days for the last week.

The unfortunate truth I have to face now, though, is that I can’t work on “Outcast” equally with “Pithea” this month as I’d hoped. Since my Skype editing group caught up with my own advance editing a month or so ago, I feel like I’m barely keeping ahead. And I need to keep ahead, because I’m making a lot of big changes to areas that I know weren’t good before we get there, so we don’t waste our time on those parts. So for a while, I need to focus only on revising “Pithea” so we don’t run out of material to work on some Tuesday night soon.

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 6, 2015

Words/Time: 59 minutes, revising “Pithea.” My hard copy is a huge mess right now, with notes and changes and numbers that point toward my notebook where I do more intensive rewriting (when marking words out and writing in the space above it will just not work). And a new editing note today cropped up when I decided to go a different way after having already rewritten a few areas, and then had to mark out the numbers that told me where to find the first rewriting. But then I realized I’d marked out ones that were supposed to stay, because I’d been confused about where the new stuff was going to fit in. So then next to my mark outs, it says, “ok” in a few places. I’ve decided I need to transfer these changes to the computer tonight, while they’re still fresh, to avoid being confused by the mess later. So I will start on tomorrow’s goal tonight still (midnight is usually my cut-off for daily writing goals, even though I always feel like the night really ends when I go to bed, usually after midnight. It’s a habit I probably got from NaNo).

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 5, 2015

Words/Time: 3590 words, revising “Outcast.” I’ve run into one area that will take some rethinking to explain in the new story world. It’s not even something that was related to the game I had been writing fanfiction for. The fun of writing fanfiction (at least for the game I used to write it for) is that you can get away with a lot more than you can when you’re writing what’s meant to be set in more of a real-world setting. Basically, based on a friend’s description of a character he wanted me to include in my story, I wrote about a woman who could become invisible. That part’s not the problem, though, as that is actually a thing in my world. But when she used her trick, she sort of always brought a breeze with her. It was supposed to mask the sound she made moving around, but she was the only one who could do it. Now, I have no way to explain her doing this, and really just need to remove that part. However, it’s incorporated into the scene, and won’t be a simple removal. It’s just one paragraph, though, so for now, I’ve marked it to look at later. I was really flying with my work today and didn’t want to slow down to figure this out.

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 4, 2015

Words/Time: 30 minutes, revising “Pithea” by the noise of the fireworks being set off all around me. After the town’s official show, there are booms all night around where we live. It’s a little distracting, especially the really big ones really nearby. A lot of today’s work was rewriting the current scene to include a new character who was supposed to be in the scene, but I’d forgotten about. She still comes in late, but since I need her to make the transition to the next scene (and location) easier, I had to find a way to fit her in.

Daily Challenge Check-in: July 3, 2015

Words/Time: 2137 words, revising “Outcast.” So far there haven’t been a lot of changes that I’ve had to make, mostly wording differences. Still, I’m going over it with a fine-toothed comb, to make sure I don’t miss anything. I’ve already revised this story several times, so the change in story world is the biggest thing I’m doing. Later on, that change will require a lot more work than here at the beginning.