Month: February 2024

Weekly Writing Update: 2/11

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While I wait for my beta-reading sisters to read “Power,” book #3 in the Pithea series, I’m starting to work on book #4. I wrote the first draft during NaNoWriMo in 2020 and haven’t touched it since then, so first I have to figure out what major changes need to be made and how to go about making them. I spent all of this week doing a character interview with one of the major characters in the section of the story I’m most uncertain about. It has been very helpful so far, and I’ll continue it this week.

I’ve stuck to my goal of writing 20 minutes per day, even with a few days this last week where I didn’t feel much like doing any work. It’s easier to push myself when the work ahead of me is a character interview, though, because it really doesn’t feel much like work.

While I work on continuing the series, if you’re interested in reading where it all starts, Pithea is available on Amazon in multiple formats (e-book, paperback, and now in hardcover) as well as Kindle Unlimited.

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Book Review: Good Girl, Bad Blood

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Good Girl, Bad Blood
A Good Girl’s Guide to Murder #2
by Holly Jackson

My rating: 4.5 / 5
Genre: YA mystery, suspense

After solving the mystery of Andie Bell’s and Sal Singh’s deaths, Pip and Ravi create a limited-run podcast to share their discoveries. Due to the podcast’s success, when Jamie Reynolds, the brother of one of Pip’s close friends, goes missing, his family asks her to use her audience to try to find him. Pip is resistant at first, not wanting to get caught up in another investigation, given how damaging the last one had been for her and those around her, but since the police don’t consider the disappearance a priority, Pip knows she can’t leave her friend and his family without answers.

I liked this book a tad more than the previous, I think because it felt a little more focused than the first one, with so many paths Pip went down to get to the real truth. I liked the merger of the updates from the previous investigation with the new case at hand. I have to admit that I pegged the main bad guy really early in the book, which is not normal to me, but I honestly don’t know if it was majorly telegraphed or if I just took a guess based on tropes of the genre. I think there was at least one thing that happened that wasn’t explained, which I wish had been. And the reader is definitely not given a chance to figure out the motive in advance, but then again, this isn’t exactly a cozy mystery, so I think that’s okay.

I still get serious Veronica Mars vibes from this series (in a good way). I take issue with some of the ethical and legal lines Pip is willing to cross in this book, with no consequences, though they may come about in the next book. For those who want to know about content, there is some language and references to drug use and rape, though nothing explicit. If you’re concerned, I’d definitely recommend reading it before your teen does (especially a younger teen). I’ve enjoyed this series thus far and look forward to the conclusion.

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Book Review: The Diary of a Young Girl

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The Diary of a Young Girl
by Anne Frank

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Memoir

It’s difficult to rate or review a book like this, which was written with no intention to become something read by others. Though partway through her time in hiding, Anne heard that diaries and other writings kept by people during this time would be of interest to the world later and started to make some edits to her diary, it’s still mostly raw introspection and secret thoughts. I think also that the translation left a bit to be desired at times, as there were sections that didn’t really make a lot of sense to me. But overall, I would say that, though the Franks and others in the Secret Annex were in hiding during the Holocaust and that fear and pain permeates the diary entries, it’s really more a study of being in hiding and living in close quarters with a group of people who have vastly different (or sometimes too similar) personalities. These people did not get along, even within their own family. Anne discovered that her family wasn’t as close as she thought they were and feels completely alone almost all the time. Anne herself is almost painfully naïve and immature at times, even while she talks about how much she thinks she’s matured and learned. 

My thirteen-year-old daughter decided she wanted to read this book, so I thought it was a good time to re-visit it myself. She was incredibly uncomfortable during one particular part that was understandably omitted from earlier publishings of the diary, and I would say that it’s a wholly unnecessary section (Anne describing in quite vivid detail what a female’s genitalia looks like). I really can’t imagine why Anne felt the need to write about that in her diary, but again, she didn’t expect it to be read by millions of people over the next several decades. In the end, would I say this is necessary reading for teenagers or for those interested in learning about the Holocaust? No. I’d actually recommend quite a few other books before this one (The Hiding Place and Night for starters). But it certainly does provide some insight into something that a lot of people went through during a very dark time.

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Book Review: First Degree

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First Degree
Andy Carpenter #2
by David Rosenfelt
read by Grover Gardner

My rating: 5 / 5
Genre: Mystery

Defense attorney Andy Carpenter is reluctantly brought into a case when a man confesses to murder under the protection of attorney-client privilege. The case takes a turn when Andy’s girlfriend ends up being accused of the murder, and it’s up to him to unravel a conspiracy and prove her innocence.

Frame-ups and high-reaching conspiracies are the common ground in this series so far. I like that these stories look at both the investigation and the trial, because even when Andy knows his client isn’t guilty, he still has to be able to prove it. And that’s when discovering the real culprit(s) comes in. I’m not remotely an expert in what goes on in a courtroom, but Rosenfelt makes those scenes seem much more real that what I normally see on TV. Maybe it’s just because he includes so many details that others leave out. I also really liked the bits of the previous book that continued into this one, especially Andy helping his previous client with a lawsuit against those who caused him to be incarcerated for years. The question of whether or not Andy will win the trial is probably not as suspenseful as it could be, since solving the mystery is pretty tied up in proving his client innocent, and I suspect that will be the case throughout the series, but it doesn’t make the mystery less interesting.

Only two audiobooks in, Gardner is already the definitive voice of Andy Carpenter for me. Gardner really brings Andy’s wit and sarcasm to life. I’m definitely sticking with the audiobooks for this series as much as possible. Fans of mystery, crime fiction, and courtroom dramas should consider reading this book.

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Weekly Writing Update: 2/4

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For three years, I have posted book reviews almost exclusively on this blog, which started as a place to keep myself accountable while working on my writing. I used to post every single day that I did writing work, lowering that amount to weekly when I didn’t need the daily accountability anymore. Then I stopped writing consistently for a while. Though nothing new (I’ve had gaps in my daily writing before, both long and short), when I did get back to writing again, I didn’t get back to posting. It’s time to remedy that. So I’ll dive back in with a brief update of what I’ve recently accomplished in my writing.

I finished draft 6 of “Power,” book #3 in the Pithea series only a few days ago, the last draft that I will work on alone. I have asked my 3 sisters, who helped me immensely with the revision of book #1, to read it and give me feedback—as vague or as detailed as they want to or have time to give. I’m not putting a deadline on them, though, since they’re all busy and it’s important enough for me to get their feedback before I publish it. I figure it’s been long enough since book #2 was published, what’s a little longer?

In the meantime, I’ve turned my attention to book #4. I wrote the first draft during NaNoWriMo in 2020 and haven’t touched it since then, so I’ve been taking it slow getting used to the story again while I start to work out where the first major changes need to be made and how to go about making them. Right now, it’s mostly reading and brainstorming. And I plan to do some freewriting this week, since after so much revision for so long, I really want to do some actual writing, which still isn’t needed with the first draft done of the next book.

I’ve done a pretty decent job of sticking to my goal of writing 20 minutes 20 days out of the month. This month, I’m pushing it to 20 minutes every single day (and if I miss a day, I’ll make it up). This is how I’ve maintained a pretty steady habit for several months now. Plus, I often write with my daughter (working on different projects, but at the same time, usually sitting at the same table), so we kind of spur each other on to write most days.

While I work on continuing the series, if you’re interested in reading where it all starts, Pithea is available on Amazon as both an e-book and paperback (it’s also on Kindle Unlimited).

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January in Review

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I read 13 books last month, which is a great start to the year! Though sadly, my average rating for the month was lower than I’d like, due to reading quite a few books that I didn’t enjoy a whole lot. But there were still some gems, and I started some really great series!

Here are the books I read in January:

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tasty
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lassoed
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once-a-queen
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masterminds
mistletoe
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Open and Shut by David Rosenfelt (5 / 5)
A Beautiful Disguise by Roseanna M. White (5 / 5)
A Winter by the Sea by Julie Klassen (3.5 / 5)
Tasty by Victoria Grace Elliott (3.5 / 5)
The False Prince by Jennifer A. Nielsen (3.5 / 5)
The Cat Who Had 60 Whiskers by Lilian Jackson Braun (2 / 5)
The Lassoed by Marriage Romance Collection by various authors (3.25 / 5)
Joy in the Morning by P.G. Wodehouse (3.5 / 5)
Once a Queen by Sarah Arthur (3 / 5)
The Traitor by Richard Paul Evans (1 / 5)
The Mysterious Affair at Styles by Agatha Christie (4 / 5)
Masterminds by Gordon Korman (5 / 5)
The Mistletoe Countess by Pepper D. Basham (2.5 / 5)

This list includes 4 ARCs and 0 re-reads. My favorite book from January (by a slim margin) was A Beautiful Disguise. I started 6 series, continued 2 series, and finished (or caught up on) 3 series. My ever-changing short list of to-be-reads, as well as a flag for the book I’m currently reading and an ongoing list of those I’ve read and posted about can be found here.

I’m also keeping my Goodreads page updated with a more extensive list of to-be-reads. Despite my almost too-long TBR list, I’m always looking for more to add. Feel free to offer suggestions of your favorites or just recent reads you enjoyed.

Book Review: The Mistletoe Countess

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The Mistletoe Countess
Frederick & Grace Mystery #1
by Pepper D. Basham

My rating: 2.5 / 5
Genre: Historical Christian romance

When Gracelynn’s older sister can’t fulfill her obligation to marry an English earl, threatening to scandalize both families involved, Grace offers to save all parties and marry Lord Astley herself. The earl, Frederick, takes some convincing, but soon enough, they’re on their way from America to England as husband and wife—and virtual strangers. Grace will rely on her extensive reading background to infuse some romance into their marriage and also to try to solve the mystery of why so many accidents happen around her new husband, whose elder brother, the first earl, died of slightly questionable circumstances.

I read this book because I like mysteries and historic fiction, but the mystery was just relegated to too small a part of the story. It was solved a little too easily and wasn’t hard at all to figure out. And it was bogged down by the building of the relationship, both emotional and physical, between the main characters and the author’s drawn-out writing style. We’ve all heard the adage “show, don’t tell” for authors, but if you’ve ever wondered if it’s possible for too much show and not enough tell, this is that book. It’s okay to sometimes just say someone smiled instead of saying that the corners of their mouth turned up (or something like that) every single time someone smiles.

I can’t believe I’m at a point where I feel like there needs to be “steam” levels given for a Christian romance novel. Marriage of convenience stories in particular seem to make authors feel like it’s okay to describe the physical relationship between the main characters far more than would otherwise seem acceptable in Christian fiction. This is one of the worst I’ve read, with a lot of description given as the couple ramped up to their first time together as husband and wife, as well as subsequent desires and flirtations. I realize the couple is married, so what they are doing is okay for them…not for me to be part of. And even outside of the graphicness of the physical aspects of their relationship, there’s such a focus in general on kissing (especially from Grace’s naïve perspective) and repetitiveness in the descriptions of what each thought of the other, especially physically speaking and smells…okay, Frederick smells like amber…we get it… 

Moving past these issues (which is hard to do, because they permeate the story), the characters were okay. I liked Frederick’s understanding that the poor choices he’d made in the past would affect his future with his wife. He had a sort of redemption arc, though the focus seemed to be more on being redeemed by Grace’s love than Jesus’s sacrifice. Grace, on the other hand acts like a 15-16-year-old, so I was surprised to find out about a quarter into the book that she’s almost 19. I’m not sure if we’re ever told Frederick’s age, but the difference felt weird to me. Grace is a heavy reader and tends to live her life as if she’s living out a story, to what felt like an unrealistic degree. She reminds me a lot of Anne of Green Gables, except that where Anne matured as she grew up, apparently Grace didn’t. It smooths out a little later on, but she really just seemed so childish. 

This is the first book in a series marketed as mysteries. I’m hoping that the newlywed intensity of this first book will smooth out, though given that the next two books involve the couple trying to go on or actually going on their honeymoon, my hopes are low. Still, I’ll give the series another try. As for recommending this book, if you are interested in the genre and aren’t bothered by the mostly personal-preference issues above, please check out the link below to see what others thought. You might like it more than I did (experience tells me that you will). Though don’t expect much of a Christmas atmosphere to this book, because it’s only barely related to the season.

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