Words/Time: 20 minutes, revising “Pithea.” I’ve been achy and just generally feeling under the weather the last two days. I’m not sure if there’s a cause or if I just need more sleep. I decided today was a good day to just go for my normal challenge minimum of 500 words or 20 minutes, and use some of my buffer for Camp NaNo. If there’s one thing I’ve learned in the last few years it’s that pushing myself to work when I’m not feeling up to it can lead to an unwanted stretch of no work for a while. But I was at least able to focus for 20 minutes, so I could avoid skipping today altogether.
Month: July 2015
Daily Challenge Check-in: July 18, 2015
Words/Time: 1 hour, 42 minutes, adding revisions for “Pithea” that were made on paper into the computer. I still sometimes think counting this as writing work is cheating, but it has to be done. Revising on paper is a lot easier for me, and it has to go into the file eventually. And since my free time is limited, it almost always has to happen during my writing time. Plus, often when I’m making these transfers, I come across other things to change too, or redo an edit I’d already made, so there’s still some revision.
Daily Challenge Check-in: July 17, 2015
Words/Time: 2526 words, revising “Pithea.” It was a solid hour of work with few distractions for once. This area of the story didn’t need a lot of work, fortunately. It was a little emotional, as sad news was shared and one tragic backstory was revealed. My poor characters have been through a lot, and this is nothing compared to the wringer Alexander goes through.
Daily Challenge Check-in: July 16, 2015
Words/Time: 911 words, revising “Pithea.” Missy’s retelling of events is a little more detailed now, which may or may not be okay. After a few sections of actual dialogue when Missy tells part of the story and Naolin reacts, it speeds through the rest with little more than a, “She told the rest of the story, and he interrupted a few more times.” So it may be too abrupt, but I’ll wait until the TCSTB gets to that part to worry about it.
Daily Challenge Check-in: July 15, 2015
Words/Time: 33 minutes, revising “Pithea.” I was working on a section that seemed like a cascade of dominos. When I started editing one part of dialogue because it was obsolete, I realized that something before it was also obsolete. Other things I’ve changed made these areas need big overhauls. Then that led to going back a little further to change something else to the rest of it would work. And during all of this, I had more interruptions from my kids than normal, and after too many of them, I gave up on being able to concentrate for the evening. So I cut it short tonight to avoid getting a bad attitude about the whole business that might carry on past tonight.
Daily Challenge Check-in: July 14, 2015
Words/Time: 3396 words revising “Pithea” with two of my sisters over Skype. Also known as the 47th meeting of the Tri-County Sisterhood of the Traveling Book. We got through just over 11 pages of double-spaced text. It’s good to know that last week’s higher-than-normal word & page count wasn’t just a fluke, since we weren’t far from that again.
Camp NaNo week 2 has past, so here’s a quick update on my progress–my goal for the month is to work for an average of an hour per day on my revision. I’m still doing great with that. I’ve missed one day all month, and I easily made up for it. Right now, I’m almost 2 hours above where I need to be for the NaNo goal. It’s not nearly as exciting as having a word count to share, but I’m happy with the progress I’ve made this month.
Daily Challenge Check-in: July 13, 2015
Words/Time: 2659 words, revising “Pithea.” I sped through a lot in an hour’s work. I was a little distracted by the severe thunderstorms that have been passing through the area, but the area I was working on didn’t require as much major fixing as usual. No rewriting this time at all. There are a few minor areas that I’m wondering about, if my sisters will bring up an issue with them when we get there during a TCSTB meeting, but I’d rather not draw attention to those areas. I’ll wait and see if they say anything.
Daily Challenge Check-in: July 12, 2015
Words/Time: 1 hour, revising “Pithea,” and then half an hour putting those revisions into the computer. In anticipation of our Tuesday meetings, one of the members of the TCSTB often reads on Monday evening. There is already enough in our shared document for her to read, but last week, we got through a lot more than usual. Just in case, I might as well be extra prepared. Plus, the extra half hour catches me halfway up from not doing any work for Camp NaNo yesterday.
Dream Every Day: Fanfiction That Isn’t
Full disclosure: I used to write fanfiction. A lot. All for one MMORPG called Ragnarok Online, which my husband and I played for around a year. It was where my love for writing fiction resparked, after having dimmed during high school. I’m never sure what’s going to happen when I say I write fanfiction. Plenty of people have no real opinion. Some say they have written or currently are writing fanfiction as well. And some scoff, laugh, roll eyes, or quietly assume the worst about what that means. There are many misconceptions about fanfiction, but that’s not what this post is about.
This post is also not about convincing you to write fanfiction—at least, not precisely.
One of the biggest benefits of fanfiction is that some of the work is already done for you. Characters are already in play, relationships built (or at least started), sometimes a plot is left dangling that you can pick up and run with. At the very least, in the case of a mostly story-less, character-less world like was in the game I wrote for, a setting has already been established—a whole world built, with mechanics in place that I didn’t have to create myself.
Don’t get me wrong; I’m not saying fanfic writers are lazy, but let’s face it—it’s easier to start writing when some of the work has been done. And that’s where I’m going with this post.
As writers, we are often reflections of what we take in. My dad is a blacksmith, and so is my main character’s dad. I have a character that I created long ago who is jovial, always enthusiastic, outgoing, and sometimes annoying; in recent years I actually met someone in real life who reminds me of that character, so now when I write that character, I keep this other person in mind as a guide.
The same can be said for books we read, movies or television we watch, or even music we listen to.
A major character in my story “Outcast” was partially inspired by Nathaniel Hawthorne’s The Scarlet Letter, mostly in that I decided to give her a physical mark that reminded people of her mistake.
I have grand plans for a dramatic scene in a story that I never finished when I was writing fanfiction (but will likely pick back up someday and finish in my new story world) that was heavily inspired by a song called “Letters From War” by Mark Schultz.
And the entire premise of a short story I wrote years back was drawn upon the question, “What if the girl had to save the guy?” which I asked myself after watching a movie with my sisters. (For years now I’ve been certain it was the movie Last Holiday that led me to that, but after rewatching the climax to that movie, I don’t see how it could have been. So now I’m not sure what the movie was.)
As a whole, writers get ideas and inspiration from everyday life all the time, so none of this is special. Most writers that I talk to seem to always be neck-deep in ideas that they have to choose between when deciding what to work on next. This advice is more about what you can do if you’re looking for new material. A fresh idea, a different direction to take your plot, or a new character to introduce.
In the book Now Write! Science Fiction, Fantasy and Horror, there is an article about taking an existing story and simply adding a different element to it. Examples were moving the story to space, adding dragons, setting it in an alternate dimension, or adding time travel. The idea is not to literally rewrite the same story with the same exact plot with that one added element, but to use that as a starting point. Once you start plotting and/or writing, you make it your own. By the time you’re done, it will most likely look very different from the original.
And that is really where I’m going with this post. Take a cue from fanfic writers and let other stories around you inspire you. What you liked or didn’t like about them, what you’d change or how you think it would have continued.
Dream for yourself: For the rest of this post, understand that “story” can refer to any work of fiction in any medium—print, big or small screen (even a single episode out of a series), or audio.
Think of a story you really liked, but just didn’t like the ending. Or wish a character had been given a different side-plot. How would you have done it differently? What would have been better?
Or think of a story you absolutely hated. Starting with the same premise and same characters (or different characters, if they were part of what made the story so horrible), rewrite it so it’s better.
What character do you really despise? I don’t mean the kind that are meant to be hated, but one that fell flat for you. The character who grated on your nerves. Who was meant to be a comic relief but was just stupid. Or maybe one who was indeed an antagonist, but the villain factor was taken too far. Even a protagonist who you just didn’t sympathize with and couldn’t care less if they lived or died. What would you have done differently? How would you have made that character better for the story?
Yes, this is what some fanfiction writers do. But it doesn’t have to turn into literal fanfiction. If you do not purposely hold yourself to the world the original story is set in, you can make it your own. Or simply use these questions to spark an entirely different idea.
So how about you? Are you now or have you ever been a fanfic writer? Have you noticed real life or fictional stories seeping their way into your writing?
Daily Challenge Check-in: July 11, 2015
Words/Time: 997 words of something completely unrelated to anything I should be working on. Not even fiction. But still writing. My husband and son are on a camping trip this weekend and my daughter and I spent some quality time together. Then I started getting a headache that was far too reminiscent of yesterday’s nightmare. So I decided to take it easy on editing work today. What I did write (which was a new blog post in the “Write Every Day” series) qualifies for my daily challenge to do some sort of writing work every day, but doesn’t qualify for Camp NaNo. So now I have a day to make up for.

