Words/Time: 3590 words, revising “Outcast.” I’ve run into one area that will take some rethinking to explain in the new story world. It’s not even something that was related to the game I had been writing fanfiction for. The fun of writing fanfiction (at least for the game I used to write it for) is that you can get away with a lot more than you can when you’re writing what’s meant to be set in more of a real-world setting. Basically, based on a friend’s description of a character he wanted me to include in my story, I wrote about a woman who could become invisible. That part’s not the problem, though, as that is actually a thing in my world. But when she used her trick, she sort of always brought a breeze with her. It was supposed to mask the sound she made moving around, but she was the only one who could do it. Now, I have no way to explain her doing this, and really just need to remove that part. However, it’s incorporated into the scene, and won’t be a simple removal. It’s just one paragraph, though, so for now, I’ve marked it to look at later. I was really flying with my work today and didn’t want to slow down to figure this out.