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Book Review: The Visitation

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The Visitation
by Frank Peretti

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Christian thriller

When supernatural religious sightings occur in a small town, former pastor Travis Jordan isn’t interested in getting involved. But then a man claiming to be Jesus Christ, though without necessarily saying those words, takes a special interest in Travis. While the national media and many pilgrims flock to the town looking for a certain brand of spiritual awakening, Travis is headed toward a confrontation that might test everything he’s ever believed.

I read this book many years ago, when I was a teenager or young adult, and I remember not caring for it all that much. While reading it again now, I came to realize that, most likely, I didn’t fully get it back then. I’m not saying that this book can only be appreciated by someone who grew up in the church, is old enough to have seen many years of “church stuff,” and has become disillusioned by it, but I think it helps a lot. Travis’s church background reminds me quite a bit of the types of churches I grew up in and the movement my family traveled to take part in, and for all of the promises and flash promised, it’s really easy to lose God in all of that. That is what Travis is dealing with as his small town becomes a mecca for those who are looking for healing and inspiration, but not necessarily salvation.

The vehicle for this plot, though, is the man with scars on his wrists who mostly provides what people are looking for. Local clergy debate whether or not his deeds are from God, and though this is a small town, there are a lot of different churches, though it doesn’t appear that many of them are biblically sound. This might be normal, but it makes me really sad. In fact, the whole book made me sad, and what makes the story all the more realistic is that there isn’t exactly a “happy ending” for the bulk of the people. I’d say the main takeaway from this is a reminder to not let tradition and religious trappings get in the way of what Christianity should be—a relationship with Jesus. Peretti’s signature writing style brings suspense to the story, and while I think the subject matter isn’t going to be for everyone, if it sounds like something you’re interested in, I definitely recommend it.

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Book Review: Abby’s Letters

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Abby’s Letters
Book #1
by Dana Romanin

My rating: 2.5 / 5
Genre: Christian YA romance

When 17-year-old Jane’s mom dies and leaves her and her 13-year-old sister Abby alone, Jane is determined to keep her sister out of foster care and does her best to pretend that her mom is still alive until she turns 18 and can file for guardianship of Abby.

The synopsis, as given above and the official one for this book, intrigued me a lot. The official synopsis includes an explanation for the title—thinking her mom is still alive, Abby writes letters to her, through which Jane comes to see a different side of her mom, who became an alcoholic after her husband’s death. This aspect intrigued me the most, especially considering the loss of my own mom earlier this year and hearing my sisters talk about a somewhat different mom than I really knew. Sadly, Abby’s letters don’t come into the book until much later than I expected and are mostly short and shallow. The connection they cause Jane to feel with her mom felt forced to me.  Instead, the plot was largely dwarfed by the all-too-common tropes often found in YA and/or romance. A love triangle casts a heavy shadow, and Jane lets herself be goaded into doing things she wouldn’t normally do because someone called her “boring,” thus making the character feel cliché and detracting from the otherwise strong personality I think the author was going for.

The book has 4 perspectives—all 3 sides of the love triangle and Abby. I felt it was a bit much at first, but I don’t really remember having any issues with it throughout the book (on the other hand, I don’t really need to see how perfectly perfect Jane and her body are from two male perspectives). I took issue with Jane’s seemingly cavalier treatment of both guys, though, as she would touch the friend on the chest or something, right in front of the boyfriend, as if she had no idea (at 17, mind you) of the intimacy of such a gesture.

Despite its shortcomings, the book did have some touching moments. I liked the conversion story, though it’s relegated to near the end of the book. It is a big part of the reason, though, that I am interested in seeing how this series continues, despite giving this book such a low rating. That and because I had an inkling that something was going on with Lindsey, who briefly turned the love triangle into a square, and the synopsis for the next book confirms my suspicions. As for this first book, though, it had the potential to be a poignant story about loss and discovery, but the love triangle and other YA/romance tropes got in the way.

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Book Review: Annabel Lee

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Annabel Lee
Coffey & Hill #1
by Mike Nappa

My rating: 4.5 / 5
Genre: Thriller/suspense, Christian

When an eleven-year-old girl is hidden in an underground bunker by her uncle and told to not open the door for even him, unless he gives her the secret passcode, she doesn’t know why she’s there or how long she might be alone in the room with only a guard dog as company. Private investigators Trudi Coffey and Samuel Hill are turned onto the hunt for something secret and hidden, never expecting it to be a human being.

This book hooked me from the beginning and didn’t let up. It was fast-paced, suspenseful, and intriguing with some well-developed characters. I particularly like the bond that forms between two of those characters, though I think it’d be a spoiler to say who they are. It’s not Coffey and Hill, though, not because they aren’t good characters and good partners, but they were once married and are now divorced. And though the book seems to be leading toward a possible future reconciliation, at least as partners (they were also partners in a private investigation business when they were married), I could take or leave a reconciliation of romance, because one particular thing that Samuel did while they were married is something I know I could never get over. If Trudi can in a future book, good for her.

The book is told from three perspectives: Trudi Coffey’s and a mysterious ex-Special Forces man called The Mute’s are in 3rd person, past tense, and then there’s Annabel Lee (the 11-year-old girl), whose perspective is in 1st person, present tense. Normally this kind of changing between tenses and POV types bothers me, but I found that I didn’t mind it in this book. I suppose an author’s style can really affect how well it works. There was something about the writing that reminded me a lot of Frank Peretti or (early) Ted Dekker books I’ve enjoyed. I would not call this a Christian-genre book, exactly, but more like a book written with a Christian worldview, as Trudi had become a Christian in the years before the story and tries to filter her life through that newish lens. On the other hand, there are some really brutal and gory fight scenes in and around the climax. It got to be just a bit too much for me, which is the reason for the half-star detraction. Outside of that, I loved this book and recommend it to fans of suspense and thriller novels, especially with a Christian leaning.

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Book Review: Take Me Out of the Ball Game

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Take Me Out of the Ball Game
McGee and Me! #8
by Bill Myers

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Children’s Christian fiction

In an interesting take on the dangers of idol worship, both Nick and his normally wise father put all their hopes in a particularly athletic teen on their Little League team. Though the stakes are small compared to the lesson, it’s also a situation many of us have found ourselves in (probably with something other then baseball). It can be rough to be reminded that the only One you can really put your trust in is God, though on the other hand, life is certainly easier when we do remember that. Though I’m not much of a baseball person, I enjoyed this story overall. These books may not be easy to find anymore, but if you do have the chance to read this book or procure it for an 8-10-year-old child, I recommend it.

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Book Review: Beneath the Swirling Sky

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Beneath the Swirling Sky
The Restorationists #1
by Carolyn Leiloglou

My rating: 5 / 5
Genre: Christian children’s fantasy

Though named after Vincent van Gogh and loving to paint when he was younger, 13-year-old Vincent wants nothing to do with art anymore, after realizing that he’s not as good as he hoped he’d be. So when his parents leave him with his great-uncle Leo, a painting restorer, during spring break, Vincent expects to be bored. He expects to be lectured about art. What he doesn’t expect is to fall into a painting of van Gogh’s Starry Night and find out that he has the ability to travel through paintings. Then his little sister gets lost inside the same painting, and it’s up to Vincent and his strange cousin Georgia to find her.

Full disclosure: I am not an art lover; in fact, I’ve never had more than a cursory interest in even famous paintings. Yet I really enjoyed this book and can say that one does not need to be really into van Gogh, Rembrandt, etc. to read and like the book. The author does a good job of allowing the reader to tap into the enthusiasm of the characters in the book, even Vincent, who tries to convince himself he doesn’t care about art anymore. The focus on that in the narration got a little repetitive and almost caused me to lower my rating by half a star. However, the story and characters outside of that, and the payoff to Vincent’s attempt at being dispassionate about art are all wonderful, so I couldn’t bear to give the book anything less than 5 stars.

As Vincent and Georgia try to track down Vincent’s little sister, they come across others that can travel through paintings—others whose intentions are not exactly noble. And Vincent comes face-to-face with his own worst qualities in a very real way. But in a fantastical twist, he also comes face-to-face with the One who sees everything he is and still loves him. I don’t want to say anymore about this, because it was the absolute high point of the book for me, the moment that I knew I was going to recommend this book to everyone, young and old, and that I will read it again and again in the future.

Thank you to Netgalley and WaterBrook & Multnomah for providing me a copy of this book to review.
Publication date: September 12, 2023

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Book Review: The Woman from Lydia

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The Woman from Lydia
The Emissaries #1
by Angela Hunt

My rating: 5 / 5
Genre: Biblical fiction

When Euodia, a Christ-follower in AD 51, sees a young slave girl being treated terribly by her master, she buys the slave to free her. But though the slave no longer brought a profit for her masters after a Jewish rabbi had robbed her of her “gift” of divination, one of her masters claims the sale was not done legally. He takes the girl back and travels to find someone who can restore her gift so she can continue to earn money for him. Euodia and her servants follow the master and slave in the hopes of rescuing the girl who should rightfully be free.

Hunt takes a couple of passages from the book of Acts and weaves them into a rich, heart-filled story that I absolutely loved! The bulk of the story is the journey east from Philippi, Euodia trailing behind Hector Hostilius, hoping to catch up to him before he manages to restore the slave girl’s gift with an unclean spirit or sells her for being worthless to him. Even before that, though, and throughout, I was caught up in the setting, from the work Euodia does making purple clothing to the travel on the Via Egnatia and so many other things. A warning for those who might be bothered by this kind of thing—Hunt doesn’t shy away from the harsh realities of life during this time period—violence, idol worship, sexual immorality, etc.

Euodia’s faith in Christ came from an encounter with the apostle Paul, who is also the rabbi that “cursed” the slave girl Sabina by casting a demon out of her (these are both of the parts that came from Acts). While most of us don’t face the kind of situation Euodia is in here, trying to literally free a girl in captivity, I mentally cheered her resolve and wholehearted trust in God. I was on the edge of my seat waiting to see how it was all going to play out. The book goes back and forth between Euodia and Hector for much of the book, and I’ll admit that that led me to expect a far different outcome to the book than it has. An unpredictable plot is a good thing, though, and there was not one thing about the plot or the ending that I would have changed. Well, maybe one thing, but it’s small and would be a spoiler to explain. And I did notice a few weird name discrepancies, wherein a slave was first given one name then later referred to by another and Hector’s business partner had 2 slightly different spellings for his last name. If either of these things was intentional, I didn’t pick up on it.

There is some romance in the story, but it also was not what I expected from early in the book, and it was my favorite kind—subtle and sweet. I appreciate that Hunt didn’t give us more than necessary in the way of physical interaction between the two involved, which I feel happens far too often in Christian fiction. Overall, I earnestly recommend this book for those who enjoy biblical fiction, especially from the time after Christ.

Thank you to Netgalley and Bethany House for providing me a copy of this book to review.

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Book Review: A Royal Christmas

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A Royal Christmas
by Melody Carlson

My rating: 4 / 5
Genre: Christian Christmas fiction

Adelaide Smith is ready for a change in her life, but her plans didn’t include being found by the father she never knew, learning that he is the king of a tiny country in Europe, or being asked to travel there to meet him. Simply stepping foot into the country puts her in the crosshairs of someone who doesn’t want her there.

This was a short read, but I really liked it. Adelaide’s lawyer mind and down-to-earth qualities give her a level head (though to be honest, I have a hard time believing she isn’t goading the queen when she asks her father about the nativity scene, when she knows it was the queen who didn’t want it out). There is a bit of romance, but it doesn’t take over the story at all. The story doesn’t go the predictable route that it easily could, and I liked the common theme of “God’s plan in God’s time.” I appreciated Adelaide struggling with the darker traditions this small country has related to Christmas (though I really wish more people could at least see the possible problems with Santa Claus/St. Nicholas traditions, too). In fact, I think my favorite aspect of the story was the way Adelaide was sort of trying to put to rights the changes the queen had made away from Christian values more toward paganism. I may be exaggerating it a little, but I think that could have been expanded on into a larger story, and I would have been all for it.

Small things that bothered me were several repetitive spots that I noted and my utter bewilderment over the way the rulership turned out. It would probably be a spoiler to explain, so I won’t, but I think that either the author didn’t explain the way it all went down very well or this kingdom has some peculiar laws of succession. Overall, though, I was quite happy with this novella. It contains a lot of Christmas charm, and I think that anyone looking for a feel-good faith-based read this Christmas that isn’t too over-the-top sappy should pick up this book.

Thank you to Netgalley and Revell for providing me a copy of this book to review.
Publication date: September 5, 2023

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Book Review: Signs of Life

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Signs of Life
by Creston Mapes

My rating: 3 / 5
Genre: Christian thriller

Investigator Wayne Deetz has the distinction of interrogating the perpetrator of a mass shooting, trying to get the answers about why, how, and possibly with what help. Months after the shooting, Tyson Cooper, whose wife was killed during the event, struggles to move on with his life and begins to question what right the shooter has to live. Deetz’s and Cooper’s stories are told in alternating chapters, with Deetz diving into the interrogation mere hours after the event and Cooper’s starting 10 months later.

I wasn’t entirely sure what the core of this story would be—a psychological dive into the mind of a mass killer, a look at the aftermath of his victims? I didn’t really see how it could be an action-packed race to stop a terrible event from happening, considering that the synopsis makes it clear the mass shooting has already happened. In the end, though, there was some of that as well as the look at the aftermath of the victims, in the form of more than one person who lost someone that day. I can’t really say there was much psychology on the killer’s side shown, which is not a problem, partly because it would have made the book much darker than I would prefer and also because it’s not really said to be about that. The story starts out pretty slowly and continues that way for more than half of the book. Then suddenly, it’s super tense and hurtling toward a major climax. The pacing could have been better, but I’ll admit that I was pretty caught up in the book in the last third.

A lot of my problems came in small bits and pieces here and there. I didn’t have any issues with the writing style (other than the aforementioned pacing), though there were several places that I’m certain a proofreader should have caught an extra comma here or there, or one spot where a couple of sentences at the beginning of a chapter were literally repeated at the beginning of another, 2 chapters later (this book was self-published, fyi). But for example, why, in a book set in pretty modern times especially, did the author choose to have one of the characters make the distinction that his son’s girlfriend was black (but he and his wife have decided they’re are okay with it) and that he worried what family and friends might think? Why was there such a large focus on violent video games as the catalyst for the shooter’s rampage, when literally a quick search online shows that there really isn’t any correlation (maybe unless the perpetrator is already mentally unstable). I have a few other examples that I marked in my notes, but I don’t want to unbalance the review.

The Christian angle in this book is overall pretty good. Cooper and his late wife were Christians, but he has decided that God is not what He claims to be in the Bible, if he could let such a wonderful woman as his wife die (actually, I think he’s in danger of putting her on a pedestal, unless she really is as perfect as his reminiscences would have us believe). Deetz is an unbeliever but is introduced to Christianity by his son, who attends what sounds like a mega-church. Two different starting points lead to some interesting conversations about God. In the end, I wish I had liked this book more, but I didn’t dislike it either. It’s clear that plenty of fans of the genre liked it more than I did, so if you’re interested, definitely check it out. I have another Creston Mapes book on my shelf, given to me by a friend, so I’ll be interested to read another book by this author.

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Book Review: Back to the Drawing Board

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Back to the Drawing Board
McGee and Me! #6
by Bill Myers

My rating: 5 / 5
Genre: Children’s Christian fiction

Oh, Nick, I really feel ya in this story. Not that I’m an artist, not even close, but I definitely know what it’s like to feel threatened by someone who comes along and seems to be better than you at something you felt was your strong point. Quite frankly, everything Nick feels here I have felt before, so this book hit me closer to home than most of the others in the series. The lesson Nick learns—to simply do your best and focus on using your talents and abilities in whatever way God has planned for you, rather than worry about comparing yourself to others—is a good one for everyone and even a good reminder for those who may have learned that in the past. Definitely one of my favorites in the series. McGee, Nick’s animated friend, isn’t as enjoyable on the page as he is on the screen, but I tend to just skim the all-animated sections now. These books may not be easy to find anymore, but if you do have the chance to read this book or procure it for an 8-10-year-old child, I recommend it.

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Book Review: Facing the Enemy

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Facing the Enemy
by DiAnn Mills

My rating: 2 / 5
Genre: Christian suspense, romance

The sudden death of her previously estranged brother leaves FBI Special Agent Risa Jacobs reeling and questioning her responsibility in the tragedy as well as her faith. Her partner, Gage Patterson, doesn’t understand when she resigns from the FBI to go back to teaching creative writing at a college, but he vows to keep working her brother’s case. But when a student turns in a writing assignment that is a spot-on eyewitness account of her brother’s murder, Risa finally has a lead to pursue and won’t be staying away from the FBI long.

This is the third DiAnn Mills book I’ve read, and though I did liked the first one, I’m starting to notice a trend in which I don’t get along well with her writing style. I often found myself confused and unable to grasp the meaning in the author’s choice of words. Dialog felt unnatural or stilted, especially during interviews with people involved in the investigations, and characters’ words didn’t always quite line up with each other’s. And sometimes, it seems like there’s subject-verb confusion that should have easily been caught by an editor. It’s a little difficult to explain, but I’ll share one quote that I think is a good example of what I mean. Said by a character: “Running didn’t keep them safe. But fear took over. Still am.” I promise, I’m not leaving anything out that would explain what the “Still am” refers to, or if I did, it’s because what it refers to is so separate from the rest of this quote that I didn’t realize that’s what it was supposed to connect with. And maybe plenty of people will read that line and just keep going, because the intent is clear enough (still am…running, I guess?). But for me, I can’t help but stop short and think, “Huh? Still am what? Huh?” And that takes me right out of the story. And since this is just one example of a lot of different lines that made me scratch my head, hopefully that gives a good enough understanding of why I struggled to get into this story.

The message in the book is good, though, and the main reason I gave it two stars is for the conversation with the psychologist, who I felt asked some good questions and really got to the heart of Risa’s grief, doubt, and self-blame. I wish it could have come a little earlier in the book to spare us some of the angst, but it was still appreciated. The relationship between the two MCs, on the other hand, also confused me. They’ve been partners for five years and are both already in love with each other (secretly) at the start of the story, yet sometimes it seems like they really have a lot to get to know about each other still. The writing assignment angle, which is what really caught my attention in the synopsis and made me want to try another DiAnn Mills book, hoping it would be more like the first one I read than the second, was a pretty big let-down for me. I also struggled with consistency issues in various places. I really dislike giving this low of a rating to any book, and I’ve found myself questioning my own ability to read and comprehend what I’m reading correctly, since I’ve so far been in the vast minority with my thoughts of this book and the previous one I didn’t care for. Please check out other reviews for different opinions, as most of them are positive so far, if you’re interested in the synopsis and/or genre.

Thank you to Netgalley and Tyndale House Publishers for providing me a copy of this book to review.
Publication date: September 5, 2023

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