Unfixed
Book #1
by Amy L. Sauder

My rating: 2.5 / 5
Genre: Urban fantasy

A mysterious circus in a barley field becomes a pivotal point for two intersecting storylines—one before the fire that destroyed the circus and one after. As Max looks for Julia, the last person to join the circus before the fire, the story of Julia joining the circus unfolds for the reader. This circus, though, is not ordinary. With living puppets, each of whom has a special power, there’s much more going on than meets the eye.

Urban fantasy is not my normal fare, but I couldn’t help but be intrigued by an “enchanted circus.” The author did a great job with the dark, mysterious atmosphere, and there is certainly some intrigue involved. Unfortunately for me, I struggled to follow the story most of the way through. Dialog between characters often felt like a peek into a longer discussion I wasn’t privy to. I had the feeling of “just hang in there until it makes sense” for a lot longer than I prefer in a book, and by the end, I was still left with a lot of questions and things that didn’t make sense. A cliffhanger or an open-ended book is fine sometimes, but not when there are this many questions, this many bizarre things that don’t get any kind of explanation. I won’t list them, because most could be seen as spoilers. Maybe these questions will be answered in the 2nd book of the duology, and I don’t mind some questions being left for a future book to resolve. But I really feel like nothing was resolved in this book, and some of what’s left hanging seems fundamental to the plot, which makes this first book difficult to enjoy.

When I read a self-published book, it is my intention not to let things that a professional editor would help with affect my view too much. I’m not saying that there is no burden of responsibility here, but it’s harder for self-published authors. So while it did not affect my rating, I will at least mention that the narration tends to switch between past and present tense—Max’s sections are in present tense but switch to past, and vice versa for Julia’s sections. It can detract from the book for some, so let that be a warning. Also, there’s a torture scene, which is feels out of place to me and gets a bit graphic for my taste. In the end, I wish I liked the book more, but I think it’s just a bit too muddled and dark for me. Perhaps I’m the wrong audience for a story like this, but if you have any interest in the book, please still consider reading it for yourself.

I received a free review copy from the author in exchange for my honest unedited feedback.
Publication date: November 7, 2024

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