Words/Time: 30 minutes removing “NaNo fodder” from my 2018 NaNoNovel.
I’m now on pg. 56/133, and I removed 866 words.
Words/Time: 30 minutes removing “NaNo fodder” from my 2018 NaNoNovel.
I’m now on pg. 56/133, and I removed 866 words.
Words/Time: approx. 45 minutes working on goal #2 from my post yesterday.
Though it’s 2nd on my list, and I definitely haven’t finished #1, I went to the writer’s group meeting at my local library tonight. I didn’t want to pack up my laptop, which I would have needed for goal #1, so I decided to start the brainstorming I needed to do for #2. And it worked! I know how to make the change work now, though I’ll leave the actual work for later. I have it all written out if I have forgotten about the plan by the time I get to it.
I haven’t mentioned this yet, but with NaNoWriMo over, I am making it my goal to do some sort of writing work for 20 minutes every day. I am using the goal tracker on the NaNoWriMo website to keep track of my work. I will also post here every day that I’ve done some writing work. It’s helped me in the past to maintain the habit, so I hope it does again.
Words/Time: 29 minutes removing “NaNo fodder” from my 2018 NaNoNovel.
It’s not as quick as it sounds. I have to find the areas where I’d marked words for deletion during NaNoWriMo, then figure out what words exactly need deleted. I didn’t just strike through everything I didn’t want to keep, because it takes longer. I put an end bracket to mark a spot and moved on. So now I have to figure out where the bad words start so I can delete them. This is probably a confusing explanation, but the point is, it’s a lot of searching and then some reading.
I worked on the same thing yesterday, and removed 1000 words. Today I removed 356, and I’m only on pg. 37 out of 134. I did this as an early revision step to my NaNoNovel in 2014, and it seemed to go a lot faster. Then again, I didn’t track my time, but I still got it done in 3 days. Though I only removed 4000 words, and I’ve already removed more than a quarter of that in 2 days. At this rate, it will take me over a week to finish, unless I have time to fit more work in some days.
With NaNo behind me, I want to move forward with revising other works. I have left my writing sit (outside of November) for far too long now. Here are my short-term goals:
1. Remove NaNo fodder from 2018 NaNoNovel, put scenes into Scrivener while I still remember my ideas
2. Make one obvious change to “Pithea” that is not actually a huge change for that book, but will affect future books a lot. Basically, a side character dies for no real reason, and I’ve realized that future books would be much better if he lived. So he’s going to not die, but because his death did allow a minor plot point to happen that still has to happen, I have to first brainstorm how to make that plot point happen anyway.
3. Revise “Pursuit of Power” just enough to be readable by a friend who is interested. I have hefty revisions planned for the structure of that book, but it will take a long time, and they won’t affect the overall story of this world, just what goes into that book. So before I dig into the major work that was part of my recent absence from writing, I want to just make it readable.
4. Even though I did declare “Pithea” finished a few years ago and sent it off to a couple of publishers, writing that I have done since then has led me to make some changes to it already. Changes like aging most of the characters up 3 years. I think that before I can move on to revising the next book, I need to make sure I don’t need to make changes to the first one. Plus, I think it’ll help me get back into the swing of things if the book that starts it all is fresh in my mind. It’s been so dusty lately.

Granted, it’s not as exciting as filling the chart in November, but I’m glad to have somewhere to chart my daily progress. My goal works out to an average of (approximately) 20 minutes per day during the month of December.
As I attempt to get back into a daily writing habit, I hope to also get back to my Monday feature, which I call Monday Moments. Short explanation: every Monday I will post a piece of writing practice from the past week. For a longer explanation, go here.
For today’s Monday Moment, in honor of NaNoWriMo, here is a short excerpt from my recently finished NaNoNovel “Protector.”
After everyone had left, Lorrin stayed in the room again. She had many notes that she wanted to go over, trying to come up with an idea for how to proceed.
“I think I have it figured out,” she heard from a man who had come back in after the others had left. It was Falin.
“How’s that?” she asked, trying to pull her brain from the thoughts that had been getting her nowhere.
“I know what we can do to solve this.”
“Do tell.” She didn’t believe for a moment that he was going to give her some brilliant plan. And sure enough…
“We should go out into the fields and stare at the grass.”
She didn’t look back up. It was exactly as she had expected.
“No, I’m serious,” he said. “We’ll all go out and lie on our bellies, pick a blade of grass each, and just stare at it for hours. I’m sure we’ll see some sign of trouble.”
She still didn’t answer him, but he was making it difficult for her to concentrate on the notes.
“Look, do you have any better ideas?” he asked. “Maybe cut off some pieces and bring them back here. Oh, I know! We’ll put some in our food and see if it affects us like it does the animals. Maybe we’ll all wake up in the morning with a double next to us.”
“Falin!” she finally stopped him, mentally chastising herself for reacting at all. “None of this is helpful. Do you find it all a joke?”
“Yes.”
“Yes? This is all a joke to you—that your village is in danger of being overrun by predators if we do not stay out there killing them first? That the ecosystem is out of control and we have no idea why?”
“No, not that. The joke is that you and your army men will be the ones to figure it out.”
“We’re all you have, so you might as well make the best of it.”
“Oh, sure, I get that. You and your soldiers will get it all solved for us, I’m sure.”
“Seriously, what is your problem? Why can’t you just realize that we’re only here to help? None of us has done anything to bother you, so why do you antagonize us so? Why do you insist on making your snarky comments during every meeting?”
He opened his mouth to speak, but she continued.
“You are making my job more difficult than it already is. If you do not want to help us solve this problem, just leave and we’ll find someone else from your village who can take your place.”
He sat down in the chair opposite the table from her. “You won’t find anyone from the village who knows the area as well as I do.”
“I don’t care. We’ve been here long enough, we’ll make do with someone who knows the area less than you do, but who is more willing to help.”
“I am helping.”
“That’s debatable.” Those words hung in the air for a moment as neither of them said anything else. Lorrin was surprised by the force with which she’d said them. She was normally quite a calm person.
“I don’t mean to make your job harder,” he finally said quietly. “I just…don’t like soldiers.”
“I’ve gathered that. Any particular reason?”
He chuckled. “None you need to hear.”
The Words: 4,874 on this final day of NaNoWriMo.
Because it is the last day of NaNo, and because I knew I was close to the end of the draft, but unsure of how close, I had hoped to be able to write a lot of the day, or at least until I finished the story. However, I have been working on a project for work all week and had to finish it today. But I sat down a little before 9 pm, which is already earlier than I’ve been getting to my writing time lately. Brought up @NaNoWordSprints and dove right in.
The Story: Yesterday, I said that I had written the climax already. Oh, how wrong I was yet again this month. As I thought about the rest of the story throughout the day today, I realized what the climax should be, and it was ahead of me.
I’m not going to say anything else about the story, but I did write the climax today, and finished the draft!
This will lead me to book 3 of this trilogy, and while that book is still quite a mystery to me, I now have a lot more of an understanding of how that book will go than I did before this month (and that’s considering that I didn’t even know I was writing book 2 of the trilogy until about a week ago).
Final word count: 86,841
Don’t forget to check out today’s NaNoToons if you haven’t already: 2018 – November 30th. Be sure to check back tomorrow too, as there is often a final comic on December 1st.
The final episode of the NaNoMusical is perfect for the final day of NaNo. Be sure to watch the wrap-up!
The Words: 5419 today.
I more than made up for yesterday’s shorter word count. After midnight last night, I wrote for another hour, trying to salvage the night’s writing, even if it counted for the next day. That got me about 2500 words. Then from around 10:30 to 11:30, I did a few sprints with @NaNoWordSprints and even wrote in between.
I’m getting more and more excited about this story. It’s funny, because on Nov. 13th, I gave myself the badge that says I had a eureka moment.

I thought that filling out the middle of the novel (and adding more words to a somewhat short novel) by showing one of the MCs in her home environment (which was then part of a more important moment) was a big “Aha!” moment.
Then, on the 25th, I had the defining “Aha!” moment of this novel, in which I realized what I was really writing. (I won’t explain it again, but go here if you want to read about it–it’s near the bottom of the post.) Then I had to change course with the climax and conclusion of the story.
I kept thinking I needed to sit down with a notebook and write out some new ideas for those things. I thought I was going to outline the last few scenes of the book. I cannot stress this enough–I have never done well as a pantser. However, I never got around to doing any of that planning, but kept having to come back to my writing without any more idea of what was going to happen.
The discovery and smaller “Aha!” moments that have come out of that writing have been amazing! Don’t get me wrong–a lot of it is going to need some serious work. I wrote several scenes that I later had to mark for deletion and wrote something else when I realized it needed to go a different way. But I think I am on the right track now, and I am hoping I will have time to finish the draft tomorrow. (I’m past the climax, but I don’t know how long the conclusion will end up being.)
The Story: Clark got himself into a bit of trouble and was taken to the king, who fortunately knows enough about what’s going on to trust him when he says he has a story to tell him. But first, they have to go somewhere safe.
Total word count: 81,967
Don’t forget to check out today’s NaNoToons if you haven’t already: 2018 – November 29th
The Words: 1258 today.
I was hoping for another 3000 words today, but it just didn’t happen. My husband had the afternoon off work, so we decided to go shopping (some Christmas, some just regular shopping) with the kids. We didn’t get home until 11 pm, so I hopped onto @NaNoWordSprints and did a couple sprints to at least get as much as I could written.
I’m going to write at least another 1000 words before I call it quits for the night, and still try to get a full 3000 more tomorrow. I’m still trying to figure out what else needs to happen before this story is over (and what the ending will be), but I think I’m starting to have some ideas.
The Story: Clark, Nathan, and Penny discuss going back to the other country soon. Nathan is worried about the Madness situation that they are dealing with, especially since they know nothing about it. Clark wants to go back, because he wants to do a little digging into the possible conspiracy he’s sniffing out.
So they return 2 weeks after they were last there, and all spend some time exploring in some way before their meeting with the king.
Total word count:76,548
Don’t forget to check out today’s NaNoToons if you haven’t already: 2018 – November 28th
The Words: 3,061 today.
I was hoping for another 3000 words today, which I was able to do. I have no idea if this goal will get me to the end of the book by the end of the month, but I’m sure hoping.
I went to a write-in tonight, which again, technically, is not a write-in. It’s a writer’s group, and a very small one lately at that. There was just me and another person tonight, which has been the case a few other times this month. We didn’t end up writing because we talked the whole time, but it was still a lot of fun!
Still, I had to get all of the words in after my daughter went to bed. Fortunately, good ol’ @NaNoWordSprints was there to help.
The Story: We follow Nathan and Clark back to Pithea. I truly didn’t expect Pithea to be in this story at all, so this was a special situation for me. I didn’t expect Nathan’s wife to be in the story either, but suddenly, there she was! Nathan and Clark filled her in on their most recent trip to the other country (which still doesn’t have a name…).
Total word count: 75,290
Don’t forget to check out today’s NaNoToons if you haven’t already: 2018 – November 27th
The Words: 3490 today.
I set my goal for today at 3000 words again. I did a few word wars with people from my region on Slack first. My word count went down with every sprint we did. I had gone from smooth-flowing dialog into…a love scene. I enjoy romantic scenes (to a degree), but I have a harder time being quick with them.
Then I did some sprints with the @NaNoWordSprints feed on Twitter. I basically told myself to worry less about the emotion in the scene and more about getting through it more quickly. I sped up a little, but mostly it just helped when I got past that part.
The Story: The king and prince finished a somewhat heated conversation with Nathan and Clark. They also offered one of them a job, which I’m not even sure myself if he’ll take, because I didn’t even think of this until today’s writing.
Then we go back to “present” time and the king and prince go back to the capital city. Events have been set in motion that have ramifications to the entire world!
That may sound very dramatic, but I just realized something unbelievable last night, which probably won’t make sense to anyone except for me. For a long time, I’ve known a huge secret about this world that none of my characters knew. But one of my characters was always destined to blow the lid off that secret, in what I have come to realize will likely be a trilogy of books within the greater series. I have written book 1, but have been unable to pin down what book 2 would entail. Last night, I realized that this might just be book 2! And I am both excited and a little nervous about this understanding. A lot more thinking and brainstorming will have to go into figuring this out. But that is a job for after NaNo.
Total word count: 72,229
Don’t forget to check out today’s NaNoToons if you haven’t already: 2018 – November 26th
The Words: 3977 on my Neo.
My goal for today was 3000 words. I got started around 10 pm, and the feed at @NaNoWordSprints was between sprint-runners. So I went back to the word crawl I started yesterday, themed for Dr. Horrible’s Sing-Along Blog. A 15-minute sprint for that produced 832 words, and then the Twitter feed came alive.
After 2 sprints, I had 2400 words, and a #1k30min got me the rest of the words.
The Story: I started today’s words with a few more additions to the ongoing letter Lorrin has been writing to the king. There are now 5 entries, all made after big events happened, when Lorrin wished she could have been there for him, but hadn’t been able to.
Then I went into another flashback where I explore the aftermath of the war with Antios. The king is faced with a very difficult decision about the magic-like Power that he has only learned about himself recently. He consults the prince and their advisors, but in the end, the decision has to be pushed back.
Total word count: 68,739
Don’t forget to check out today’s NaNoToons if you haven’t already: 2018 – November 25th
And with 5 days left of NaNoWriMo, be sure to check out episode 5 of the NaNoMusical. This one contains my favorite song of the whole musical!