NaNoWriMo Day 24

The Words: 2063 written today. Today’s writing put me past my total from last year, which was 90,228. Before that, I’d always written 50k within a few days from the end and that was it.

The Story: I have now decided that the decision I made yesterday about being done with the novel was wrong. I did glance at the beginning of this big battle scene from the original version and realized that the main characters are not doing the right thing yet to merge with that original version. So I do need to write a bit more to get my current story to a place where it matches up with that scene. (And for all I know, it will never actually flow into the other version, and I’ll rewrite it all anyway.) I thought it would be quick, but I should have known better.

Total word count: 91,761

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NaNoWriMo Day 23

The Words: 1957 written today. I have a feeling the rest of the month will be smaller numbers like this, or at least most of it. That is partly due to the fact that a lot of the excitement of the month has worn off, partly because I’ve been having a lot less chances to find writing time outside of the few hours in the evening, and partly because I have run out of anything to write. A friend of mine told me recently that that shouldn’t matter. He said, “Think stuff up. That’s what authors do.” He has a point, but I’m terrible at pantsing. Even if I found something to write through the end of the month, I doubt I’d be able to get nearly as many words per day as I was getting before.

The Story: I have officially decided to stop the story at the part where Lex and Leahna show up to help with the fighting in the desert. I think. I have written that whole battle scene before. See, technically, Pursuit of Power is a rewrite. I wrote a story set in what I would call a stepping-stone world I created with a friend, before I created the one my stories take place in now. I like the new one loads better. But enough of it was different that I had to do a complete rewrite on Lex’s story. The same basic elements are there–Lex and Leahna working together and becoming friends, Lex’s dad’s mysterious death that Lex has been seeking answers to, and the band of mercenaries in the desert causing trouble for Lex. So this scene was written, and I thought it came out very well. Only minor elements that are different from one world to the next would need to be changed, and I’m not sure it’s worth a rewrite. So I feel that writing it again now will be difficult, frustrating, and simply unnecessary. When I go back and read through the already-written scene after the month is over (I won’t let myself do it now, I think it will only slow me down), I may realize I’m wrong, and if so, I’ll rewrite it then. For now, though, I’m moving on. So today’s writing largely consisted of writing some more personal bits of Leahna’s life–her family, her work, etc., in order to flesh her character out. It won’t be directly included as-is, but I will hopefully find places to insert tidbits about her, or use it to know what kind of things are going on in her life while Lex is going through his ordeal. And now I would say I am officially done writing this book. My tentative plan for the rest of the month is to start writing what comes after the battle at the end of this story. Because really, Lex’s story is not over yet. He hasn’t solved the mystery of his dad’s death or uncovered the secrets about the Power that were hinted at in the letter he found. Or figured out who the mysterious people are that were mentioned in the letter. And I have no idea how any of that will come to be. But I know what will happen directly after this book ends, so I’ll start there.

Total word count: 89,698

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NaNoWriMo Day 22

The Words: 1919 written today, in the wee hours of the morning before I went to bed. I spent the rest of the day at my sister’s house, having a marathon meeting of the TCSTB (revising last year’s novel). Memorable quote from tonight’s meeting: “How are we supposed to help you stab a bear if we don’t know how power works?”

The Story: Lex and Leahna are traveling back to the desert to help the militias who have already been there for months, fighting what has turned out to be a large force of mercenaries. Rusalki, the leader, is not above using very unethical, illegal, and unnatural means to win the battle. Thus Lex and Leahna felt that their advanced abilities would be very helpful and even necessary, despite both being sought after by the authorities.

Total word count: 87,741

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NaNoWriMo Day 21

The Words: 2414 written today, over the course of a 30-minute and a 15-minute sprint. My writing time has really been limited lately. I’ll be gone literally all day tomorrow, so I plan to write 1500-2000 words for tomorrow before I go to bed here.

The Story: Lex, Leahna, and Glyn discussed the best way for them to be involved in the official operation to go and shut down the band of mercenaries that has attacked Lex and his loved ones multiple times now. Lex and Leahna are both now under suspicion of breaking some very important rules in their country, so they can’t being involved in the mission. That leaves only Glyn to help. And now Lex is taking a step back to look at everything that has happened, and feels the need to apologize to Leahna for dragging her into all of this so long ago, and basically ruining her life.

Total word count: 85,822

day 21

Goodbye, week 3; hello, home stretch!

Week three comes to a close today. That means we have 9 days left of NaNoWriMo. It may sound like it’s getting down to the wire, but that’s still so much time! And this year, that includes 2 full weekends! Of course, it also includes Thanksgiving (for Americans) and possibly a busy holiday weekend. For some Wrimos, this is an exciting time. It’s the home stretch! You’re past the week 2 slump, and the week 3 blahs. Now you’re ready to really push it to the end! For some, it has just been a long, hard slog through the month, and you’re so behind, you don’t see how you could catch up.

I am writing this post, because my entire month of NaNo blog posts have been completely centered on myself. I went into this month with this blog being solely a place for me to share progress I made on my writing project, in order to try to keep myself motivated. Thus, that is how I continued for this month. However, I have done very well this month, and thought that I would try to reach out to other Wrimos. Whether you’re struggling or not, whether you’re finished or just starting (yes, it’s not too late to begin even now), whether your goal is 50k, 200k, or just to survive the month, maybe I can help in some small way.

1.  I had always thought that “do not edit” was such a given during NaNo that everyone understood and followed it. I’ve learned this month that that is not the case. When the NaNo rules say you do not edit, they mean it! That means if you wrote a whole scene only to decide you needed to go a different route, don’t delete it! Mark it somehow to remember to delete it later, or even put it at the end of your file so it’s not in the way. Whatever you do, don’t delete it. But more than that, it can mean you don’t even correct small mistakes as you go. Take the following paragraph for example:

“The militia members warned Lex and Leahna to be careful, and to contact them if she showed up, or if they had any way of knowing what she] where they could possibly find her. Then they went back to their respective bases and Lex and Leahna returned to their homes. Lex considered suggesting to Leahna that they continue to stick together when they were both free, even if they weren’t training. That way they could help each other stay safe if Rusalki attacked agian. BUt he said nothing, because he didn’t think she would agree with him and he didn’t want to upset her more.”

This shows what I do when I decide mid-sentence, mid-scene, or mid-whatever to change directions and don’t want to delete what I had. Some people use strikethrough, and that works too. I prefer the bracket, because I don’t have to go for the mouse and highlight the offensive part. I can keep my hands on the keyboard, hit the bracket button, and go right on typing. Then I can search later to make sure I get them all. But the above paragraph also has what I was referring to, in regards to not fixing small mistakes. Misspelled words, accidental capitals (or lack thereof) or whatever other things we usually quickly backspace and delete. Fixing those doesn’t lose you words, but it does lose you time. The time it takes to go back and fix, but also the lost flow of writing. It can be very difficult to train yourself not to fix these things, and I often will still do it out of habit, but as much as I can, I just ignore it and keep going.

This error has popped up a few times this week, in the Word document where my entire NaNo novel is saved. I think this means I have officially learned how to NaNo.

2.  Don’t take time thinking of names. For characters, towns, organizations, whatever. If you have not already planned for a name ahead of time, and a name does not readily present itself to you while writing, just stick in a placeholder and move on. I will often given characters names like Bill or Steve (and this is a fantasy world, mind you) just so I can keep going. Or for a town, I’ll write “VILLAGE NAME” to keep moving (yes, every time that village name comes up). The same idea applies to time elements. If you can’t remember for sure how long ago two characters met when they’re reminiscing later, don’t go back and look it up. Not yet. Make a note to go back, or do something like, “Do you remember when we first saw each other SO MANY MONTHS ago?” It’ll stick out when you’re editing and you’ll be sure to fix it later.

3.  Writing in small blocks of super-focused time with some resting time in between can work wonders. Not everyone works this way, but I know a lot of people swear by this method. So if you haven’t tried it, you should! You can use a site like Write or Die, and set the timer for any amount of time (I’d suggest 10-20 for your first time). Just be sure to copy and paste your words to your actual document afterwards. Or you can simply set a timer and write like normal. The “break” in between can be a few minutes to give yourself a breathing moment and figure out where you’re going for the next stretch, or longer to get up and walk around, get a snack, or of course do other activities (like work or sleep) before coming back to write later.

For an extra boost, word wars are wonderful motivators. That basically just means you and someone(s) else agree on a start and stop time, and write as much (of your own story) as you can for that time, then compare numbers afterwards. The competition can be a great way to force yourself to just write without thinking too much about it. Or on a similar note, go to https://twitter.com/NaNoWordSprints and wait for whoever is running the feed at the time to start a new sprint. There is some downtime now and then, but most of the day, they have sprints of various times going on back to back to back.

Word wars, not to be confused with punctuation wars.

4.  Find helpful ways to procrastinate (is there such a thing?). My favorite example is the NaNoMusical. Created by WETangent in 2012, it is a brilliant 6-part video series with themes and situations familiar to any Wrimo. The music is catchy and fun, and…well, you should watch it. Watch the first episode, and if you enjoy it, use the rest of the episodes as rewards for a certain amount of words written. Which could also be a tip! Find ways to reward yourself for milestones. A half hour of television for every 2000 words. Or something appropriate to your own hobbies, your own pace, and your own needs to stay on track or get caught up.

By the end, you'll either want to punch Rick or love him to pieces!

“It’s November 1st, thousands of people madly writing….I hope you’re up for crazy, ’cause NaNoWriMo has begun!”

5.  Don’t give up. That is probably the most important thing I can tell you. Whether you’re writing for fun, a creative outlet, to relieve stress, or to have a finished project to do more with, NaNoWriMo is a wonderful event and can be a lot of fun. It doesn’t have to be stressful, but I know it can be to some. The stakes aren’t exactly high, and losing is not the end of the world. You shouldn’t dread your writing time, or worry about how badly your writing is going. If you find your story is going a completely different route than you’d expect, just follow it and see what happens. Maybe a side character is becoming more interesting to you. Give them all the time they need. Your main story will still be there later. If your words are lagging so badly, you don’t see how you could get back on track, make a new track! Set a personal goal of less words, or plan to keep going after November (though frankly, that is easier said than done). Come back in April or July for Camp NaNoWriMo.  Just don’t quit.

I have done NaNoWriMo five non-consecutive years. Each year I learn something new, whether about myself as a writer, about how to make the most out of NaNo, or about the art of writing in general. Hopefully this year, I can help someone else learn something new too.

NaNoWriMo Day 20

The Words: 2143 written today, all in the evening again. It wasn’t a spectacular day, but I had to write the aftermath of yesterday’s emotional, weepy scene. I’m past it now, so things should be easier tomorrow. Plus, I didn’t feel well today, so that didn’t help.

The Story: I stopped writing at the end of the sad scene, which was a mistake. I usually try to make sure I stop in the middle of a scene, paragraph, or even sentence. That way when I come back, I get right back into the flow. I didn’t even want to deal with the aftermath, but considered just moving on to the hurdle toward the end. But I did it, because I knew that I’d just have to deal with it later, and it would be better now, when I was still in the right mindset. Lex got his chance to really get scary, threatening to burn down all of the houses from that mercenary hideout, with all of the mercenaries still inside. Fortunately, he has loved ones who were able to talk him down. So now, they are waiting for the authorities in their country to investigate this band of mercenaries. Meanwhile, Glyn and Lex actually get back to the original quest, finding out what really happened to Lex’s dad. The only trouble is, that’s not really going to be wrapped up in this story. At all. In fact, the final scene coming up (which will be a long scene, set during a full-on battle out in the desert) will be the end of the story. Somehow I think this is going to be a problem for this book.

Total word count: 83,408

 

 

day 20

2014 – November 20

Competition is one of the best driving forces of NaNoWriMo! I’ve watched two ladies from my region leapfrog each other on word count, and the verbal sparring that goes along with it on our Skype chat makes everyone laugh. They are driving each other forward, and it’s great!

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Nanotoons_2014_11_20Errol: One day, I should just make user accounts for Jen, Rob, Victoria and Dave. That would be fun. I think. Give it a more transmedia kinda feel. ^_^

And yes, I haven’t been using my Kari Maaren card. 😦 I really should, if only I would get these done earlier than the night before at 10pm.

Oh! And did people see my selfie photo collage? All the selfies I took at Night of Writing Dangerously! ^_^

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NaNoWriMo Day 19

The Words: 3551 written today, all from 9:30-11. Nothing else to say here this time.

The Story: Today’s writing really went awry. On my outline, after the gang infiltrated the mercenary base, it just went right on to the big final scene. But I hadn’t planned for how they would handle what they brought back from that base. So then I had to choose between two things, both of which would allow Lex and Leahna to move on to their big lead up to the climax of the story. One was pretty tame, but was a messy fix. The other was horrible, but was a perfect fix. Guess which one I chose. It was horrible, soul-crushing, and made me cry a bit. I might have to take tomorrow off while I recover.

Total word count: 81,265

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NaNoWriMo Day 18

The Words: 1792 written today. Today was my lowest day for this month, but I expected it to be. I didn’t write any until evening, and I only had about an hour total to write. I was glad to at least make par (though, yes, yesterday, I wrote 3700 words in 1 hour, and today I did half that; however, it takes a special focus to write that much, and I did not have it today). I had a Skype meeting with my sisters (sixteenth meeting of the Tri-County Sisterhood of the Traveling Book), who are working with me to revise the novel I wrote last year.

The Story: Lex, Leahna, and Glyn continued on with their plan to infiltrate the hideout of a band of mercenaries. Their mission was a success, but they don’t know yet that it was also somewhat unsuccessful.

Total word count: 77,714

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NaNoWriMo Day 17

The Words: 4901 written today. I actually wrote almost all of this in 2 sessions. The first was I think 15 minutes last night before I went to bed, during which I wrote 594 words. Then during the afternoon, I went on the main forums for the first time since November started. I don’t visit them much, because they’re just so crowded, it’s difficult to be heard. But I went into the Word Wars, Prompts, & Sprints forum, because my month has become all about that, and I was curious what was there. Quickly, this thread caught my eye: 3k in an hour! After reading the first post, I decided that I had to at least try that and see how I could do. When I sat down to write for the evening, I wrote a few hundred words to warm up, and then I plunged in, with Write or Die set to 1 hour and 3000 words. When the 1 hour was up, I had written 3700 words! Not sure I’ll want to do that again, but it was nice to know I could.

The Story: Lex and Leahna found what they were searching for pretty quickly into today’s session, though they’d been looking for months in the story. Then they enlisted the help of an old friend of Lex’s dad’s named Glyn. Lex shared his plan infiltrate the place they found, which impressed both Leahna and Glyn, partly because of some abilities they did not know he had, and partly because of how good of a plan it was. He’s been thinking about it for months though. They were executing the plan when I left off today, infiltrating a hidden hideout for a band of mercenaries (a small town-sized hidden hideout).

 

Total word count: 75, 922

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