The Hawthorne Legacy
The Inheritance Games #2
by Jennifer Lynn Barnes
My rating: 3 / 5
Genre: YA mystery, romance
Spoiler notice: The following review may contain some spoilers for the previous book in the series, The Inheritance Games.
Avery Grambs is still trying to understand why a complete stranger, Tobias Hawthorne, left her his vast fortune when he died, and a recent development has left her, and other members of the Hawthorne family, reeling. Never truly knowing who is friend and who is foe, Avery and at least some of the Hawthorne brothers attempt to unravel the mystery about the presumed-dead, long-lost Hawthorne son.
Like with the previous book, I kind of had to try to push aside my annoyance with the “romance” angle in this book. It’s based way too much on physical attraction for my preference, though I will at least say that there was a little deeper connection happening here than the previous. Still, Barnes’s idea of romance is not at all the same as mine, and some of her decisions on how she wrote that side of the story and then how things stood at the end made me scratch my head.
Fortunately, I was much more into the mystery side of this book than I was in the previous, at least for a while. Because Avery has already had time to get past the initial shock of the inheritance, meeting the family, and learning how crazy the house is, there’s more going on in the search for answers. But I should have been suspicious when major answers seemed to come way too early in the book. “What could the rest of the story be about?” I found myself wondering. Oh, if only I were less trusting…. One of my biggest grips about the plot of the previous book was that there weren’t really any solid answers about what I thought the main mystery was (why did the old man leave his fortune to Avery?). There was an answer, but it was weak and didn’t seem to be all of the story. I was much happier with how things started to pan out during this book…until Barnes basically undid everything she’d set up by the end. And this point, I don’t know if the “new” answer at the end of this book is any more the “real” answer than what we ended the last book with, or if the next book will start with Avery or one of the Hawthorne brothers unearthing a clue that starts them on the hunt to the real “real” answer. Maybe the intention here has always been for the mystery of the unknown heiress to stretch across the entire trilogy, but Barnes’s way of keeping that going is to pretend to give us an answer, then go, “Fooled you! That’s not the real answer; you have to keep going!” And I don’t particularly care for that kind of story. Subversion is one thing, but this is giving me mental whiplash.
I would definitely stop reading here, not remotely caring enough to see how Avery finishes her required year living in Hawthorne House, but my daughter, who loves this series, wants me to finish it out, so I will do it for her. It’s still difficult for me to recommend this book to anyone, but if you read my review and don’t feel that what bothered me would bother you and you’re interested in the story, you might consider trying it out yourself (it’s a continuing story, though, so you definitely need to start with the first one).
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